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Some People Argue That Holding Sporting Events Is Beneficial To A Country’s Development

Some People Argue That Holding Sporting Events Is Beneficial To A Country’s Development 6dr3x
While there are people who believe that hosting international sporting events brings economic prosperity, others believe that the benefits are insignificant. In this essay, I will examine both views and explain why I think hosting international gaming events foster a nation’s growth. On the one hand, many people believe that it is useless to spend millions or billions of dollars on hosting a major sporting event. Such events might lead to an influx of tourists but there is no guarantee that they will return or benefit the tourism industry in future. Also, huge capital investment is required for hosting international events. For example, stadiums need to be built and roads and highways have to be repaired and widened. It is also important to spend a lot of money to give a face lift to the host city just to impress the visitors. While infrastructure development is usually beneficial, sometimes these stadiums will remain idle once the events are over and this leads to huge loss of resources. Hosting a major event also makes a city vulnerable to threats like terrorist attacks and to counter them, security has to be beefed up. In other words, hosting an international sporting event is an expensive business. On the other hand, in my opinion, every penny spent on such events is a wise investment. Such events generate a lot of jobs in the short term. They are also an opportunity to boost a nation’s image. If the event is organized meticulously, it will not only enhance the reputation of the country but also make it an attractive investment destination of foreign investors. Such events also give nations an opportunity to promote their tourist destinations. If tourists who came to watch the events leave happy, they are more likely to return. They will also act as goodwill ambassadors bringing in more visitors in future. Obviously, if these events are staged properly, they lead to the economic development of the country both in the short term and long term. In conclusion, while it is true that holding an international event is an expensive affair, in my opinion, they do lead to economic prosperity and enhance the reputation of a country if they are organized properly.
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brings economic prosperity, others believe that the benefits are insignificant. In this essay, I will examine both views and
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foster a nation’s growth.

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people
believe that it is useless to spend millions or billions of dollars on
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hosting
a major sporting
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event
. Such
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events
might
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lead
to an influx of tourists
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there is no guarantee that they will return or benefit the tourism industry
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in future
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, huge capital investment
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for
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international
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events
.
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have to
be repaired
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important
to spend
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money to give a face lift to the host city
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to impress the visitors. While infrastructure development is
usually
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sometimes
these stadiums will remain idle once the
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are over and this leads to huge loss of resources.
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also
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makes
a city vulnerable to threats like terrorist attacks and to counter them, security
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has to
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is an expensive business.

On the other hand
, in my opinion, every penny spent on such
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events
is a wise investment. Such
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events
generate
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a lot of
jobs in the short term. They are
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an opportunity to boost a nation’s image. If the
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is organized
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, it will not
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enhance the reputation of the country
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also
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make
it an attractive investment destination of foreign investors. Such
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give nations an opportunity to promote their tourist destinations. If tourists who came to
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watch
the
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events
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leave
happy, they are more likely to return. They will
also
act as goodwill ambassadors bringing in more visitors
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in future
.
Obviously
, if these
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events
are staged
properly
, they
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lead
to the economic development of the country both in the short term and long term.

In conclusion
, while it is true that holding an
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international
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event
is an expensive affair, in my opinion, they do
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lead
to economic prosperity and enhance the reputation of a country if they
are organized
properly
.
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IELTS essay Some People Argue That Holding Sporting Events Is Beneficial To A Country’s Development

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  American English
4 paragraphs
369 words
6.0
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