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Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?

A common opinion is that, people consider more merits for teenage to pursue at the same institution, on the contrary other think boys and girls should be trained differently. In my opinion I think that, it is more convenient for them to jointly take their studies. This essay wll justify my points. There is a sense of competition when these two alumni placed together in one classroom will arise. Generally men are born to lead women. Therefore a male student by nature is discouraged when a female student pass more in the test. Similarly the other side, are struggling hard to win so that achieve to a fifty-fifty gender balance initiated by most states. So this situation creates an unending competition between these sexes. In addition to that, social interaction between themselves is ameliorated. In schools there are some activities which involve both sex, and other sports which discourage interactions. But for those encourage cooperation, create unity among the students. For example, running sport always bring together the rival group.
A common opinion is that,
people
consider more merits for teenage to pursue at the same institution,
on the contrary
other
think
boys and girls should
be trained
differently
. In my opinion I
think
that, it is more convenient for them to
jointly
take their studies. This essay
wll
justify my points.

There is a sense of competition when these two alumni placed together in one classroom will arise.
Generally
men
are born
to lead women.
Therefore
a male student by nature
is discouraged
when a female student pass more in the
test
.
Similarly
the other side, are struggling
hard
to win
so
that achieve to a fifty-fifty gender balance initiated by most states.
So
this situation creates an unending competition between these sexes.
In addition
to that, social interaction between themselves
is ameliorated
. In schools there are
some
activities which involve both sex, and other sports which discourage interactions.
But
for those encourage cooperation, create unity among the students.
For example
, running sport always bring together the rival group.
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IELTS essay Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?

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