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Some people argue teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. others believe intelligent children should be taught seperately and be given a special treatment.discuss both views and give your own opinion.Write atleast 250 words.

Some people argue teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. others believe intelligent children should be taught seperately and be given a special treatment. Write atleast 250 words. JLJb0
Education is the primary need of every child around the world. Certain section of the population are of the opinion that special need children and normal child should be provided the same education so that it's beneficial to both alike. however, there are number of people who hold the belief that iintelligent children deserve better education and be provided exclusively. I completly agree with the former view and this essay will argue why blended education rather than exclusive education should be more in demand.
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Education
is the primary need of every child around the world. Certain section of the population are of the opinion that special need children and normal child should
be provided
the same
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education
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so
that it's beneficial to both alike.
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however
, there are number of
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people
who hold the belief that
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iintelligent
children deserve better
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education
and
be provided
exclusively. I
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completly
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agree
with the former view and this essay will argue why blended
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education
rather
than exclusive
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education
should be more in demand.

IELTS essay Some people argue teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. others believe intelligent children should be taught seperately and be given a special treatment. Write atleast 250 words.

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84 words
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