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Describe an environmental problem that the world facing

Describe an environmental problem that the world facing eRLOW

Healthy habitat is the most vital thing to be alive. In fact, by changing time and improving technologies and also depletion man activities, it has been more considerable effects on environment. However, one of these effects is reducing Ozone layer, that layer is one of the most important factor for humans, and keep us safe from hurt by X-ray. In fact, research shows there are some holes on the Ozone layer and it can be causes of high temperature of the earth. On the other hand, by depletion this layer there are more chance to getting cancer or cataract. Even more, it can reduce animal fertility and we need to reduce pollution by using public transportation or using bicycles.

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 activities, it has been more considerable effects on environment. However
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 is one of the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
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 factor for humans, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 us safe from hurt by X-ray. In fact, research This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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some
 holes on the Ozone You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetfloorcoatblanketbedthickness
layer
 and it can be causes of high temperature of the earth. On the other hand
, by depletion this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetfloorcoatblanketbedthickness
layer
 there are more chance to getting cancer or cataract. Even more, it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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reduce
 pollution by using public transportation or using bicycles. 