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Nowadays,a myriad number of travellers love to visit unusual places rather than common places where survival rate is

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Nowadays, a myriad number of travellers love to visit unusual places rather than common places where survival rate is negligible. I partially agree with the said notion. This essay is going to articulate the both sides with my perception in upcoming paragraphs. To embark on, as we have been read in geography about the words' suface, physical activities, and population etc. Consiquently, some of us developed a keen interest in nature in order to become a naturist and simultaneousely start journey to find out the places all around the world and filmed a documentory so that the rest world could Watch them. For example, there are such places called sahara desert and antartica where scientists go to reseach about environment and atmostphere. For intance, where sahara desert is considered as the most driest place in the world, whereas if we talk about antartica is assumed as a world's coldest continent where the situation is beyond imagination. On the other hand, there are a number of hodophiles who like to do adventures. When they watch documentories of unnatural places they push themselves to visit those place without knowing the consequences of their act. Therefore, some of them are not able to survive in atrocious conditions. For that reason, government has prohibited the entrance of such places to some extent. To conclude, as we know that every thing has its pros and cons. To explore such kind of places are benificial in order to aware people to those place about which we have been taught in books only. However, we can not neglect the risk in visiting such places.
Nowadays, a myriad number of
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travellers
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love
to visit unusual
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places
rather
than common
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places
where survival rate is negligible. I
partially
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agree
with the said notion. This essay is going to articulate the both sides with my perception in upcoming paragraphs.

To embark on, as we have
been read
in geography about the words'
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suface
, physical activities, and population etc.
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Consiquently
,
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some
of us developed a keen interest in nature in order to become a naturist and
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simultaneousely
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start
journey to find out the
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places
all around the world and filmed a
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documentory
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so
that the rest world could

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Watch
them.
For example
, there are such
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places
called
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sahara
desert and
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antartica
where scientists go to
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reseach
about environment and
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atmostphere
. For
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intance
, where
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sahara
desert
is considered
as the
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most driest
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place
in the world, whereas if we talk about
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antartica
is assumed
as a world's coldest continent where the situation is beyond imagination.

On the other hand
, there are a number of
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hodophiles
who like to do adventures.
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they
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watch
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documentories
of unnatural
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places
they push themselves to visit those
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place
without knowing the consequences of their act.
Therefore
,
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some
of them are not able to survive in atrocious conditions. For that reason,
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government
has prohibited the entrance of such
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places
to
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some
extent.

To conclude
, as we know that every thing has its pros and cons. To explore such kind of
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places
are
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benificial
in order to aware
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people
to those
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place
about which we have
been taught
in books
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only
.
However
, we can not neglect the
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risk
in visiting such
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places
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, a myriad number of travellers love to visit unusual places rather than common places where survival rate is

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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