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Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose the view. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose the view. AABe
It is true that higher studies and a university degree can have a significant impact on one's professional success. But there is another group of people which believes the other way out. This groups feels that higher education provides you a degree but professional success comes through experience. The two extremes of opinions create a sort of dilemma for many career aspirants. As a result, they remain indecisive. This essay tries to weigh the two perspectives on different parameters.
It is true that higher studies and a university degree can have a significant impact on one's professional success.
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But
there is another group of
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people
which believes the other way out. This groups feels that higher education provides you a degree
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but
professional success
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comes
through experience. The two extremes of opinions create a sort of dilemma for
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many
career aspirants.
As a result
, they remain indecisive. This essay tries to weigh the two perspectives on
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different
parameters.
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IELTS essay Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose the view.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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