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In these days, few people enter into debt by purchasing what they do not need and what can not afford.

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In these days, few people enter into debt by purchasing what they do not need and what can not afford. First, in these modern life the public were fond of huge variety markets and when there is a plethora of options then the citizens were confused to what might to purchase and not to buy. Here even they can not afford to consume the product they need. Persons were in a dilemma to buy things in the market. Even after having if they were not satisfying with the item they had consumed. In my opinion the children of this day's had interested to buy the mobiles due to variety of gadgets to make life easier. Were as the human begins are attached to the changes made by technology consequently they were looking to borrow the new materials that arrived in to the super markets and shopping zones. For Instance, this generation made shopping in a easyway through online shopping. Here they can browse plethora products through looking into the images. And by the review of the purchase. If they dislike the item then the people may exchange it. However, the youth want to follow style and the trade then the younger were purchasing it. Even they can not afford for it. However, To over come with it parents of the youngest should guide them by telling what is helpful to buy are not. Even the elders must say how money is vital too their life. The senior citizens must teach them to save the amount for the future needs as savings were they may not dependent up on others at the time of emergency. For example, the mankind might purchase the products exactly what they are looking for and what they need To conclude, I would like to say that humans are wasting much time by dept that what was their interest to buy the products.
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First
, in these modern life the public were fond of huge variety markets and when there is a plethora of options then the citizens
were confused
to what might to
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purchase
and not to
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buy
. Here even they can not afford to consume the
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product
they
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need
. Persons were in a dilemma to
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buy
things in the market. Even after having if they were not satisfying with the item they had consumed. In my opinion the children of this day's had interested to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
the mobiles due to variety of gadgets to
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make
life easier. Were as the human
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begins
are attached
to the
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changes
made by technology
consequently
they were looking to borrow the new materials that arrived in to the super markets and shopping zones.
For Instance
, this generation made shopping in
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easyway
through online shopping. Here they can browse plethora
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products
through looking into the images. And by the review of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
. If they dislike the item then the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
may exchange it.
However
, the youth want to follow style and the trade then the younger were purchasing it. Even they can not afford for it.
However
, To over
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with it parents of the youngest should guide them by telling what is helpful to
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buy
are not. Even the elders
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must
say how money is vital too their life. The senior citizens
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
teach them to save the amount for the future
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
as savings were they may not dependent up on others at the time of emergency.
For example
, the mankind might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
exactly what they are looking for and what they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
To conclude
, I would like to say that humans are wasting much time by dept that what was their interest to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
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IELTS essay In these days, few people enter into debt by purchasing what they do not need and what can not afford.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
316 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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