Some individuals are of the opinion that it is good to make friends online on various
social networking sites and internet chat rooms. However, others are in favour of
making friends by direct face to face chat. This essay intends to look at both
perspectives. I personally side with the latter view.
On the one hand, social network sites like ‘Facebook’ provide a great opportunity for
people to socialize with one another and find common ground, before even meeting.
Online social groups have become fundamental building blocks of modern human
societies. They have a beneficial effect on our way of life. They increase our social
interaction and give us more ways to make social connections. Earlier our social
interactions were constrained by national boundaries, but now the Internet has turned
communication into a global phenomenon. Today, our network of friends stretches
across the globe.
On the other hand, making friends through direct contact is definitely better as social
media sites can cause more harm than good. People can make fake IDs and cheat
anyone. Every now and then we hear stories how girls and boys were cheated through
such sites and after months of friendship, the original identity of the person turned out to
be very different. Cyber criminals can hack the IDs of people and chat on their behalf
which may cause huge misunderstandings.
Furthermore, face to face friendship is better because it is a friendship which has a
deeper bond than online friendship. Man is after all a social animal and friends are
meant to be there when you need them the most. Online friends cannot be with you
when you are sick and you need a friend’s touch. Face to face friends are with you in
thick and thin and this can never be possible with online friends.
To sum up, even though the growing majority of the world’s population abides by the
social meme: “I love my computer, because my friends live in it”, I still reiterate my
opinion that face to face friendships are stronger and longer-lasting.
Some
individuals are of the opinion that it is
good
to
make
friends
online
on various
social
networking
sites
and internet chat rooms.
However
, others are in
favour
of
making
friends
by direct
face
to
face
chat. This essay intends to look at
both
perspectives
. I
personally
side with the latter view.
On the one hand,
social
network
sites
like ‘Facebook’ provide a great opportunity for
people
to socialize with one another and find common ground,
before
even meeting.
Online
social
groups have become fundamental building blocks of modern human
societies
. They have a beneficial effect on our way of life. They increase our
social
interaction
and give us more ways to
make
social
connections. Earlier our
social
interactions
were constrained
by national boundaries,
but
now
the Internet has turned
communication
into a global phenomenon.
Today
, our network of
friends
stretches
across
the globe.
On the other hand
, making
friends
through direct contact is definitely better as social
media
sites
can cause more harm than
good
.
People
can
make
fake IDs and
cheat
anyone
. Every
now
and then we hear stories how girls and boys
were cheated
through
such
sites
and after months of
friendship
, the original identity of the person turned out to
be
very
different
. Cyber criminals can hack the IDs of
people
and chat on their
behalf
which
may cause huge misunderstandings.
Furthermore
,
face
to
face
friendship
is better
because
it is a
friendship
which has a
deeper
bond than
online
friendship
.
Man
is
after all
a
social
animal and
friends
are
meant
to be there when you need them the most.
Online
friends
cannot be with
you
when
you are sick and you need a
friend’s
touch.
Face
to
face
friends
are with you
in
thick
and thin and this can never be possible with
online
friends.
To sum up,
even though
the growing majority of the world’s population abides by the
social meme: “I
love
my computer,
because
my
friends
live
in it”, I
still
reiterate my
opinion
that
face
to
face
friendships
are stronger and longer-lasting.
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