Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is this a good or bad things. Discuss your opinion. v.1
Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is this a good or bad things. Discuss your opinion. v. 1
It is generally asserted that a few people addicted of purchasing modern appliance, mobiles and laptops. In my opinion, this is a good things as people's can be updated within today's world.
There are some reasons why this good things about people buying new gadgets, mobiles and laptops. One of reason is that; it helps to save money. For instance, nowadays many companies are launching electricity gadgets on low price so they can it with theirs reasonable salary. Similarly, new technology are more easy and understandable. As a results a normal people can use it on short period of time by this way they can also have theirs precious time. Lastly it helps to maintain their standard lifestyle. However nobody's can say bad things about their living style and also about them.
On the contrary some peoples have negative ideas on buying new gadget, mobiles and laptops. Primarily, it's lost of money. Such as people buy things like vidoe game one he play then he never play it again so it is totally lost of money. Secondly, it may be unsafe. however, there most common crime is robbing if we are carrying a new phone than it maybe robbed. Finally, it may be create discrimination between riches and poor people because new gadgets are more expensive so it can buy by only riches people not by poor people so they involve in bad activities.
In conclusion, people are found of buying current mobiles, laptops and appliances. Nevertheless, it helps to provide more security and facilities to save time in morden world.
It is
generally
asserted that a few
people
addicted of purchasing modern appliance, mobiles and
laptops
. In my opinion, this is a
good
things
as
people
's can
be updated
within
today
's world.
There are
some
reasons why this
good
things about
people
buying
new
gadgets
, mobiles and
laptops
. One of reason is that; it
helps
to save money.
For instance
, nowadays
many
companies
are launching electricity
gadgets
on low price
so
they can it with
theirs
reasonable salary.
Similarly
,
new
technology are more easy and understandable.
As
a results
a normal
people
can
use
it on short period of time by this way they can
also
have
theirs
precious time.
Lastly
it
helps
to maintain their standard lifestyle.
However
nobody's can say
bad
things about their living style and
also
about them.
On the contrary
some
peoples
have
negative
ideas
on buying
new
gadget
, mobiles and
laptops
.
Primarily
, it's lost of money. Such as
people
buy
things like
vidoe
game one he
play
then he never
play
it again
so
it is
totally
lost of money.
Secondly
, it may be unsafe.
however
, there most common crime is robbing if we are carrying a
new
phone than it maybe robbed.
Finally
, it
may be
create
discrimination between riches and poor
people
because
new
gadgets
are more expensive
so
it can
buy
by
only
riches
people
not by poor
people
so
they involve in
bad
activities.
In conclusion
,
people
are found
of buying
current
mobiles,
laptops
and appliances.
Nevertheless
, it
helps
to provide more security and facilities to save time in
morden
world.
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