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Some people are born to be a leader others believe that leadership can be learned Discuss both views and give your opinion v.3

Some people are born to be a leader others believe that leadership can be learned 3
It is believed that leadership contains in some people' gene, others argue people can learn to be the leaders if they determine to do. In my opinion, I think that there is nothing that people can not learn, including leadership. On the one hand, there are several reasons why most people believe that It is impossible to learn to be a leader. Firstly, learning leadership is too hard to the extent that most people think It is the talent rather than some characteristic that can be learned. It requires not only high qualification but the experience in real life situations and the dedication to training in the intensive working environment. For example, most successful leaders in the world such as Mark zacubug, the founder of face book or Bill gate, are very talented and both come from the well-known university, so people assume that they are born to be a leader. However, they don' t know the fact that these people have faced with many failures. On the other hand, I believe that with the right level of attitude, It is still possible for ordinary people to learn to become leaders. By observing the experienced leader or reading popular books written by founder or CEO in the world, we still have the opportunity to reach the ladder of success and become the leader someday. For instance, with the never-give-up attitude, Ann, who is the founder of one of the most successful start-up company, reaches a remarkable achievement to become the youngest enterprise in real estate market, though he was born in the run-down area. In conclusion, despite the difficulty in learning the leadership, I still believe that It can be learned as long as we have strong determination
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to be the
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if they determine to do. In my opinion, I
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that there is nothing that
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people
can not
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learn
, including leadership.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why most
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people
believe that It is impossible to
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learn
to be a
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leader
.
Firstly
, learning leadership is too
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hard
to the extent that most
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people
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think
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rather
than
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some
characteristic that can
be learned
. It requires not
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only
high qualification
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but
the experience in real life situations and the dedication to training in the intensive working environment.
For example
, most successful
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leaders
in the world such as Mark
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zacubug
, the founder of face book or Bill gate, are
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very
talented and both
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come
from the well-known university,
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people
assume that they
are born
to be a
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.
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don&
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have faced with
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failures.

On the other hand
, I believe that with the right level of attitude, It is
still
possible for ordinary
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people
to
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learn
to become
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leaders
. By observing the experienced
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leader
or reading popular books written by founder or CEO in the world, we
still
have the opportunity to reach the ladder of success and become the
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leader
someday.
For instance
, with the never-give-up attitude, Ann, who is the founder of one of the most successful
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start
-up
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company
, reaches a remarkable achievement to become the youngest enterprise in real estate market, though he
was born
in the run-down area.

In conclusion
, despite the difficulty in learning the leadership, I
still
believe that It can
be learned
as long as we have strong determination
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Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
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IELTS essay Some people are born to be a leader others believe that leadership can be learned 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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