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Some people agree with the government’s policy which urges 12-grade students to come back to school during the fourth Covid-19 break out. Meanwhile, others express their fear over the terrific consequences considering these teenagers’ safety and also the public’s. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people agree with the government’s policy which urges 12-grade students to come back to school during the fourth Covid-19 break out. Meanwhile, others express their fear over the terrific consequences considering these teenagers’ safety and also the public’s. Ow157
Recently, Covid-19 pandemic has seriously affected human’s life in Vietnam. However, because of the concern about the long break, authorities makes a guideline about letting students studying at grade 12th back to school. Some people see eye to eye with this, but there are some objections that the health and safety of the community and minors are still at risk. This essay will look at both perspectives and then give my opinion about this action First and foremost, it can be said that grade 12 is a very critical class in every student's life. Distance education for a long time does not guarantee their learning and review of knowledge that allow them to graduate from high school and take the exam into university. Moreover, letting students return to school will help them change their learning environment, meet friends and teachers again after a long time. Especially, they will have a better psychology and spirit of learning and health. On the other hand, the epidemic in our country is still very dangerous and complicated. Currently, many cases of infection have been recorded in the school community, which makes many parents and students afraid that going back to school could increase the number of infections. Returning to school will not be possible if the health and spirit of students are afraid of the epidemic. In conclusion, students at grade 12 really need to come back to school. However, the government also considers the epidemic situation nationwide. In my opinion, I do not agree with the policy which urges 12-grade students to study offline because the Covid-19 pandemic is so flexible and threatening.
Recently, Covid-19 pandemic has
seriously
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affected
human’s life in Vietnam.
However
,
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because
of the concern about the long break, authorities
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makes
a guideline about letting
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students
studying at
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grade
12th back to
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school
.
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Some
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people
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see
eye to eye with this,
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but
there are
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some
objections that the health and safety of the community and minors are
still
at
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risk
. This essay will look at both perspectives and then give my opinion about this action

First
and foremost, it can
be said
that
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grade
12 is a
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very
critical
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class
in every student's life. Distance education for a long time does not guarantee their learning and review of knowledge that
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allow
them to graduate from high
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school
and take the exam into university.
Moreover
, letting
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students
return to
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school
will
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help
them
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change
their learning environment,
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meet
friends and teachers again after a long time.
Especially
, they will have a better psychology and spirit of learning and health.

On the other hand
, the epidemic in our country is
still
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very
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dangerous
and complicated.
Currently
,
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many
cases of infection have
been recorded
in the
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school
community, which
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makes
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many
parents and
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students
afraid that going back to
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school
could increase the number of infections. Returning to
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school
will not be possible if the health and spirit of
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students
are afraid of the epidemic.

In conclusion
,
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students
at
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grade
12
really
need to
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come
back to
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school
.
However
, the
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government
also
considers the epidemic situation nationwide. In my opinion, I do not
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agree
with the policy which urges
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12-grade
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students
to study offline
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because
the Covid-19 pandemic is
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so
flexible and threatening.
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IELTS essay Some people agree with the government’s policy which urges 12-grade students to come back to school during the fourth Covid-19 break out. Meanwhile, others express their fear over the terrific consequences considering these teenagers’ safety and also the public’s.

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3 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
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