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Some people advertisements should be banned from sociel media. To what extent do you agree with the statement.

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Advertisements should not banned from scoiel media. But some people extent (do you) agree this statement. Introduction, I am completely disagree this statement because products promotion is very important for social media. But same time agree this statement because they are creat a disturbation. Advertisements meaning a spread a knowledge for new product. I thik so notice is crucial part in social media. ( nowadays) media platform treanding an nowadays as well as every person using a internet and social media. This days every company choosing a phblic network and spread a knowledgeable thing like how to using this product. For example, nowadays (every contrite) very critical sutiotion to every countries because main reason COVID-19 the government choseing multimedia and spread knowledge and new guidelines. That’s way advertisements (should) not banned from public websites. However, some advertisements should be banned because they are spread tack products and knowledge things. But some time advertisements creat disturbed whereas anyone, like I am watching some video any commercial. Product are promot. I am always eritate for me and permot fack products, cream and medical, and bother anyone products. That’s product and advocates should be banned for public website and offline newspaper. Conclusion, advertisements spread knowledgeable thinks and new products useful to any person. But some time products are fack they should be always banned.
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Advertisements
should not
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "ban"
banned
from
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scoiel
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media
.
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But
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some
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people
extent (do you)
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agree
this statement. Introduction, I am completely
Consider using a past participle here: "disagreed".
disagree
this statement
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because
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products
promotion is
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very
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important
for social
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media
.
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But
same time
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agree
this statement
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because
they are
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creat
a
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disturbation
.
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Advertisements
meaning a
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spread
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "knowledge".
a knowledge
for new
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product
. I
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thik
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so
notice is crucial part in social
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media
.
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(
nowadays)
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media
platform
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treanding
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an
nowadays
as well
as every person using
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a
internet and social
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media
.
It seems that a possessive apostrophe is missing.
This days
every
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company
choosing a
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phblic
network and
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spread
a knowledgeable thing like how to using this
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product
.
For example
, nowadays (every contrite)
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very
critical
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sutiotion
to every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "country"?
countries
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because
main reason COVID-19 the
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government
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choseing
multimedia and
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spread
knowledge and new guidelines. That’s way
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advertisements
(should) not
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banned
from public websites.
However
,
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some
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advertisements
should be
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banned
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because
they are
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spread
tack
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products
and knowledge things.
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But
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some
time
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advertisements
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creat
disturbed whereas anyone, like I am watching
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
video any commercial.
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Product
are
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promot
. I am always
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eritate
for me and
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permot
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fack
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products
, cream and medical, and bother anyone
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products
. That’s
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product
and advocates should be
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banned
for public website and offline newspaper. Conclusion,
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advertisements
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spread
knowledgeable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
and new
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products
useful to any person.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time
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products
are
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fack
they should be always
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banned
.
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IELTS essay Some people advertisements should be banned from sociel media.

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  American English
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