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Some people accepts bad situations wule some people try to improve them. Discuss both views with opinions.

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Few masses deem that it is superior to accept a bad situation like unwilling work or lackage of monetary. However, other members of society have opposite views, they believe that it is good to try and ameliorate such situations. I will elaborate my views as well as opinion regarding this in the subsequent fragments. To begin with, there is a plethora of reasons behind this thought but the predominating one is unemployment. Fee mortals are out of work. If they get any work after lots of effort then they try to do it while how much it is unsatisfied. Thus in order to earn some cash for completing the basic needs of their family they adopt yhe atrocious situations. Apart from it, few folks do not like to do frequent changes in their life or work. Consequently, they consider it to be best to accept the uncontent work. On the flip side, there are myriad of reasons to substantiate it. First amd foremost is confidence. Few individuals have a lot of confidence to ameliorate worst situations. Hence, owing to self esteem they put stringent efforts to ameliorate bad situations. Furthermore, some masses are accustomed of struggling. Hence, they try hard to deal with worst situations with the hope of beacon rather than laziness. To my mind, I opine that masses ought to try to tackle with atrocious situations and put efforts to improve them instead of adopting them. In compendium, although a number of folks accept negative situations, they try hard to deal with them instead of accepting.

Few masses deem that it is superior to accept a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
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situation
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work
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lackage
 of monetary. However
, other members of society have opposite views, they believe that it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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try and
 ameliorate such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situations
. I will elaborate my views as well
 as opinion regarding this in the subsequent fragments.

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begin
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thought
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but
 the predominating one is unemployment. Fee mortals are out of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
. If they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 after lots of effort then they try to do it while how much it is unsatisfied
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thus,
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some
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situations
. Apart from it, few folks do not like to do frequent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in their life or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
. Consequently
, they consider it to be best to accept the Possible spelling mistake found.content
uncontent
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On the flip side, there are myriad of reasons to substantiate it. First
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 foremost is confidence. Few individuals have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 confidence to ameliorate A determiner is probably missing here: "the worst".the worst
worst
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situations
. Hence
, owing to This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-esteem
self esteem
 they put stringent efforts to ameliorate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
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situations
. Furthermore
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 masses are Did you mean: "accustomed to"?accustomed to
accustomed of
 struggling. Hence
, they try This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to deal with A determiner is probably missing here: "the worst".the worst
worst
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situations
 with the hope of beacon rather
 than laziness.

To my mind, I opine that masses ought to try to tackle with atrocious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situations
 and put efforts to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 them instead
 of adopting them.

In compendium, although a number of folks accept This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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situations
, they try This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to deal with them instead
 of accepting. 