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Some peo people say that advertising encourages as to buy things we really do not need others say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives which viewpoint do you agree with you specific reasons and examples to support your answers

Some peo people say that advertising encourages as to buy things we really do not need others say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives which viewpoint do you agree with you specific reasons and examples to support your answers 50oe

It is frequently considered that, it is adventitious to show advertisement in the television for the consumers and some disagree with this arguement. I partly agree with this opinion and I think that the benefits depends on the items which they are showing up. First of all, the reason to consider the opinion of advertising helps us to buy the useful things is that, it gives us knowledge about the certain application or the products which we are not familiar with. Therefore, by gathering data we can analyse how significant it is for our daily life and based on that we can choose. For example, the advertisement of byju's application help the children to learn educational topics of school in an interesting way and in my opinion, advertising is important in one side of the coin. On the other side of the coin, the advertisements affect people badly in all aspects such as physical, mental and economical. For instance, a child on looking at the attractive and colourful advertisement of chocolates tends the child to buy that. Because of the temper-tantrum parents will buy it inspite of knowing that it is useless. The components of some of the chocolate perhaps extreme the limit of ingredients to be added that may lead the child to have eagerness to get it again. Furthermore, it not only affects the Parents economically but also it harms the health of the little ones. As a result, I think that it has a negative side too. To recapitutate, in my opinion advertising has both pros and cons and the vital part is that, it depends on the item we choose therefore, think twice before you choose.

It is frequently
 considered that, it is adventitious to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the television".on the television
in the television
 for the consumers and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disagree with this Possible spelling mistake found.argument
arguement
. I partly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactionsentimentviewpointimpressionjudgmentpoint of view
opinion
 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that the benefits depends on the items which they are showing up. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the reason to consider the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactionsentimentviewpointimpressionjudgmentpoint of view
opinion
 of advertising This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the useful things is that, it gives us knowledge about the certain application or the products which we are not familiar with. Therefore
, by gathering data we can Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.analyze
analyse
 how significant it is for our daily life and based on that we can choose. For example
, the The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?advertisement for
advertisement of
Possible spelling mistake found.BYU
byju
's application This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the children to learn educational topics of school Consider replacing "in an interesting way" with the adverb for "interesting"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an interesting way
 and in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactionsentimentviewpointimpressionjudgmentpoint of view
opinion
, advertising is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 in one side of the coin. On the other side of the coin, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 affect This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
badly
 in all aspects such as physical, mental and economical. For instance
, a child on looking at the attractive and Possible spelling mistake. 'colourful' is British English.colorful
colourful
The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?advertisement for
advertisement of
 chocolates tends the child to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 that. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 of the temper-tantrum parents will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it Possible spelling mistake found.inspirein spite
inspite
 of knowing that it is useless. The components of If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 chocolate perhaps extreme the limit of ingredients to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 that may lead the child to have eagerness to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it again. Furthermore
, it not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 affects the Parents economically
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 it harms the health of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 ones. As a result
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it has a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 side too. To Possible spelling mistake found.recapitulate
recapitutate
, in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactionsentimentviewpointimpressionjudgmentpoint of view
opinion
 advertising has both pros and cons and the vital part is that, it depends on the item we choose therefore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 twice This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 you choose. 