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A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil around the world.As the world's oil will eventually run out,it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new source of power

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One of the conspicuous trends of today's world's is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that world's oil resources will not eventually run out. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I don't entirely accept this and I Will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. Most preponderant one is that it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power and there are numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages. it offers not only one benefit more. when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to says, all these merits stands one in good stead as far, as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal factor in a aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, when only one follows such a system can they broaden their horizons thus learning such attributes as dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power. In the views of arguments outlined above one can conclude that the benefits more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power are indeed too great to ignore.

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