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ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250words

ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? You should write at least 250words w5NN
Urbanisation and global development have led to an increase in waste production. . There is no iota of doubt that todaywe are producing enormous amount of waste that cannot be decomposed at a similar rate. One of the major concerns of producing waste is all the rubbish that is accumulated due to human activities. Most of this wasteis in the form of plastic, which takesmillions of years to disintegrate. In this essay we will discuss the possible causes for the increase in waste production and waysfor governmentsto address this challenge with relevant examples. One of the main reasons for the increased waste output is the change in lifestyle of manypeople. There is an increased culture to use easy alternatives in household activities. For example, as studiesshow, the domestic consumption of plastic in the US has increased by25 percent in the last five years. This increase is mainly due to the rampant increase in the usage of use and throw away utensils, like plates, cups, etc. , Moreover, there is an increased consumption of packaged foods. This has a two-fold effect. Firstly, it leads to an increase in industrial waste due to the increase in demand. Secondly, the materials used to package these foodsare not eco-friendly. Governmentscan play a pivotal role in curbing the increase in waste products, by implementing many different rules that must be implemented by all parties involved in waste generation. For example. . . . . In addition, theycan promote the recycling of rubbish by incentivizing the local population. An illustration of this is. . . . . Moreover, they can help eco-friendly industries which leave less rubbish over high waste generating industries, by subsiding them. . The government should levy special taxes on waste production. For example, the Government in Sweden was able to reduce their waste productionby almost 50 percent by introducing organic alternatives and levying 10 percent waste management taxes on high waste producing industries. Thus, in conclusion it is very important for government bodies to take initiatives to reduce the waste footprint. There are many efficient ways to deal with the waste production that could lead to immediate reduction in rubbish creation,
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Urbanisation
and global development have led to an
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increase
in
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waste
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production
.
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There is no iota of doubt that
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todaywe
are producing enormous amount of
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waste
that cannot
be decomposed
at a similar rate. One of the major concerns of producing
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waste
is all the
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rubbish
that
is accumulated
due to human activities. Most of this
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wasteis
in the form of plastic, which
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takesmillions
of years to disintegrate. In this essay we will discuss the possible causes for the
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increase
in
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waste
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production
and
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waysfor
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governmentsto
address this challenge with relevant
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examples
. One of the main reasons for the
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increased
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waste
output is the
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change
in lifestyle of
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manypeople
. There is an
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increased
culture to
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use
easy alternatives in household activities. For
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example
, as
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studiesshow
, the domestic consumption of plastic in the US has
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increased
by25 percent in the last five years. This
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increase
is
mainly
due to the rampant
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increase
in the usage of
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use
and throw away utensils, like plates, cups, etc.
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,
Moreover
, there is an
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increased
consumption of packaged foods. This has a two-fold effect.
Firstly
, it leads to an
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increase
in industrial
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waste
due to the
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increase
in demand.
Secondly
, the materials
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used
to package these
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foodsare
not eco-friendly.
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Governmentscan
play a pivotal role in curbing the
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increase
in
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waste
products, by implementing
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different
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rules
that
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must
be implemented
by all parties involved in
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waste
generation. For
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example
.
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.
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In addition
,
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theycan
promote the recycling of
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rubbish
by incentivizing the local population. An illustration of this is.
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Moreover
, they can
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help
eco-friendly industries which
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less
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rubbish
over high
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waste
generating industries, by subsiding them.
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The
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government
should levy special taxes on
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waste
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production
. For
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example
, the
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Government
in Sweden was able to
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reduce
their
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waste
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productionby
almost 50 percent by introducing organic alternatives and levying 10 percent
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waste
management taxes on high
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waste
producing industries.
Thus
,
in conclusion
it is
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for
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government
bodies to take initiatives to
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reduce
the
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footprint. There are
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many
efficient ways to deal with the
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waste
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production
that could lead to immediate reduction in
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rubbish
creation,
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IELTS essay ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? You should write at least 250words

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
359 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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