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In future more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not to travel abroad

In future more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not to travel abroad amnY

It is unfortunate that amid vast progressive in every field of life there is also an increase in the number of the responsibilities, also rise in the stress carried out by our daily routine work which results in conflicts among family members due to lack of sleep relaxation. In order to provide time to family many civilians decided to go on vacations in their own nation rather than abroad due to much expensive, unknown culture and language. As I mentioned above I completely agree with this statement. To start with many natives desire to explore their own culture and tradition exploring the area of land and make interaction with other people to know their daily routine and familiar with them. Although it may be possible to tattoo with them but majority of people not want someone to interpret your private life. On the other hand by visiting historical places museums and other places please they know their history which consists of han defeated kings their tails. Moreover these stories will encourage your siblings to overcome fear to achieve goals that are not achievable at such a young age also, they learn how to help people who need help to make their life better. On the contrary immigrate to alien country leads to numerous formalities to follow before they want to immigrate firstly they have to fulfill the requirements such as such as police clearance certificate medical and other such things. Last but not least, they have to return in minimum period, they have no freedom as such as they experience in your own home. They have to face difficulty of a language which is major problem. To conclude traveling to the own country will help to enjoy the trip in a larger ratio as compared to abroad although foreign has a many adventure sports to interact with but the findings of the only nation can be memorable one.

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many
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own
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agree
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people
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help
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make
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To conclude
 traveling to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 country will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to enjoy the trip in a larger ratio as compared to abroad although foreign has a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 adventure sports to interact with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the findings of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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