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Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe it should remain a fundamental subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both views and give your opinion v.1

Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe it should remain a fundamental subject whether or not it is used later in life. 1
With modern inventions like calculators needs of basic arithmetic are addressed very easily. However, mathematics has over the years played a fundamental role in providing quantifiable expressions to the most simplest daily transactions as well as to complicated scientific phenomena. It thus becomes necessary to inculcate the familiarity with mathematics at an early age in a child's pedagogic life. It is true, that in many walks of life a person may not require knowledge of various complexities of mathematics such as trigonometry, calculus etc. It begs the question whether to introduce a child to mathematics which he may not use in the future or any other subject in which he wants to pursue his career. It must also be noted many children complain about mathematics being very tough and negative results in mathematics may affect a child's confidence in tackling other subjects as well. Given all of that, it is important to understand the role mathematics plays in a modern human beings life. Mathematics finds application in the simplest form such as day to day financial transactions and also complicated ones like stock markets where everything is based on complex calculations. In such a scenario is becomes necessary to have the basic understanding of the fundamentals of mathematics. Scientific discoveries such as the phenomenon of Gravity by Newton had to be defined mathematically for better understanding. Should mathematics, then be completely dispensed with? While it is debatable to the extent and complexity in which mathematics must be taught in schools, one must recognise that it is an integral part of education and should not be completely removed from school syllabus.
With modern inventions like calculators needs of basic arithmetic
are addressed
very
easily
.
However
,
mathematics
has over the years played a fundamental role in providing quantifiable expressions to the
most simplest
daily transactions
as well
as to complicated scientific phenomena. It
thus
becomes necessary to inculcate the familiarity with
mathematics
at an early age in a child's pedagogic life.

It is true, that in
many
walks of life a person may not require knowledge of various complexities of
mathematics
such as trigonometry, calculus etc.
It
begs
the question whether
to introduce a child to
mathematics
which he may not
use
in the future or any other subject in which he wants to pursue his career.
It
must
also
be noted
many
children complain about
mathematics
being
very
tough and
negative
results in
mathematics
may affect a child's confidence in tackling other subjects
as well
.

Given
all of that, it is
important
to understand the role
mathematics
plays in a modern human
beings
life.
Mathematics
finds application in the simplest form such as day to day financial transactions and
also
complicated ones like stock markets where everything
is based
on complex calculations. In such a scenario is becomes necessary to have the basic understanding of the fundamentals of
mathematics
. Scientific discoveries such as the phenomenon of Gravity by Newton had to
be defined
mathematically
for better understanding.

Should
mathematics
, then be completely dispensed with? While it is debatable to the extent and complexity in which
mathematics
must
be taught
in schools, one
must
recognise
that it is an integral part of education and should not be completely removed from school syllabus.
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IELTS essay Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe it should remain a fundamental subject whether or not it is used later in life. 1

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4 paragraphs
270 words
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