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Environment protection is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. It is claimed that the politicians must have strong responsibility, not individuals because it was too little thing that individuals can do

Environment protection is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. It is claimed that the politicians must have strong responsibility, not individuals because it was too little thing that individuals can do 2ake6
Environment protection is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. It is claimed that the politicians must have strong responsibility, not individuals because it was too little thing that individuals can do. In my opinion, I'm completely opposed to that opinion. There is a variety of reasons why individuals also need to take action to protect the environment is beneficial in some way. One reason is that politicians cannot manage all environmental issues. ranging from serious to ordinary problems. Environmental pollution is the result of each individual's attitude on the large scale. So in fact, the government has not taken radical measures to solve this problemFurthermore, I believe that each individual can be self - aware help to prevent the environment in various ways For instance recycling from the smallest actions like using every-efficient household items we have contribute to environmental protection. I think that without cooperation. between politicians and individuals, environmental issues will never be effectively tackle IF politician does not actively disseminate knowledge about the environment the moral quality of generations will decrease In conclusion, I believe that not only polite but also each individual have responsibility for environmental protection
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protection is a
hotly
-debated topic that
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often
divides opinion. It
is claimed
that the
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politicians
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have strong responsibility, not
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individuals
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because
it was too
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little
thing that
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individuals
can do. In my opinion, I'm completely opposed to that opinion.

There is a variety of reasons why
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individuals
also
need to take action to protect the
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environment
is beneficial in
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some
way. One reason is that
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politicians
cannot manage all
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environmental
issues.
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ranging
from serious to ordinary problems.
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Environmental
pollution is the result of each individual's attitude on the large scale.
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So
in fact, the
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government
has not taken radical measures to solve this
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problemFurthermore
, I believe that each
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individual
can be self
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-
aware
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help
to
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prevent
the
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environment
in various ways
For instance
recycling from the smallest actions like using every-efficient household items we have
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contribute
to
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environmental
protection. I
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think
that without cooperation.
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between
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politicians
and
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individuals
,
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environmental
issues will never be
effectively
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tackle
IF
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politician
does not
actively
disseminate knowledge about the
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environment
the moral quality of generations will
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decrease


In conclusion
, I believe that not
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only
polite
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but
also
each
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individual
have responsibility for
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environmental
protection
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IELTS essay Environment protection is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. It is claimed that the politicians must have strong responsibility, not individuals because it was too little thing that individuals can do

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
191 words
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