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some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree with this view. v.10

some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. v. 10
In this digital age, many of the marketing methods and techniques utilize in commercials are and immoral and inappropriate. I totally agree with this statement and that because advertisers mislead information and claims to promote them assets and also exploit children to force parent buy their items. Firstly, the manipulation of the audience by providing false claims so as to gain a huge chunk of the market. Through the promotion of products as health-giving, in spite of, that them consumption may generate some serious health concerns in the future. Thus, to make them claims supportive the advertiser may call out doctors or provide independent company research as an irrefutable evidence. For instance, I use to take energy boosting product “X-energy” for a long period which consequently generate me dangerous allergic reactions. Secondly, advertising company makes heavy use of "pester power" as it is more effective than targeting parents directly. Indeed, commercials affect children’s attempts to influence parents, so as much as children keep pressing their parent on the company got its product bought. For example, I remember when my nephew was 9 years old, he cried and work his mother on to buy him the “play station”. however, she could not afford it, she borrowed money to satisfy his desire and bought him the “ PlayStation”. To conclude, methods and techniques of the commercial companies are manipulative and misleading and could also use children to touch parent emotion for promoting them as sets.
In this digital age,
many
of the marketing methods and techniques utilize in commercials are and immoral and inappropriate. I
totally
agree
with this statement and that
because
advertisers mislead information and claims to promote them assets and
also
exploit
children
to force
parent
buy
their items.

Firstly
, the manipulation of the audience by providing false claims
so as to
gain a huge chunk of the market. Through the promotion of products as health-giving,
in spite of
, that them consumption may generate
some
serious health concerns in the future.
Thus
, to
make
them claims supportive the advertiser may call out doctors or provide independent
company
research as an irrefutable evidence.
For instance
, I
use to
take energy boosting product “X-energy” for a long period which
consequently
generate me
dangerous
allergic reactions.

Secondly
, advertising
company
makes
heavy
use
of
"
pester power
"
as it is more effective than targeting
parents
directly
.
Indeed
, commercials affect
children’s
attempts to influence
parents
,
so
as much as
children
keep
pressing their
parent
on the
company
got
its product
bought
.
For example
, I remember when my nephew was 9 years
old
, he cried and work his mother on to
buy
him the “play station”.
however
, she could not afford it, she borrowed money to satisfy his desire and
bought
him the
PlayStation”.

To conclude
, methods and techniques of the commercial
companies
are manipulative and misleading and could
also
use
children
to touch
parent
emotion for promoting them as sets.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
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