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Some individuals argue that both girls and boys who are given pouch currency every week have less issues about money management when children become full-grown.

Some individuals argue that both girls and boys who are given pouch currency every week have less issues about money management when children become full-grown. bEVg6

Some individuals argue that both girls and boys who are given pouch currency every week have less issues about money management when children become full-grown. I concur with the group who believe that humans should teach managing money from their primary age. On the one hand, there are a lot of advantages of this topic that still being discussed. Firstly, people aspire to earn money. That is why when children and period will develop there will be are number of dreams and wishes. Individuals try to achieve their dreams. If parents donate money to their children they learn how to buy and shopping. Secondly, when both male and females give pocket money to their children every week they also acquire to save money and to purchase something. One of best example of this is nowadays

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