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Some experts believe that it is better for the children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?(

This topic is about that some specialists find out that it is better for children learning foreign language at primary school than secondary school. Nowadays, in globalization times, knowing foreign languages is an essential skill, which helps person in different areas. In my opinion, I undoubtedly consent to the statement that upwards are higher than downwards and there are two reasons. First, youth’s brains taking new knowledge very quickly, second in primary school they have more free time rather secondary school. I will explore in the following paragraph. To begin with, there are scientists researche that young person learns new things very easy(easily), and they do not have to suffer for learning languages. It is fact that in our times the English language has become the dominant foreign language in all the world and it is very easy to find finding necessary information in English. Over 70% of internet materials are in English. Children who learning foreign language earlier have given opportunity from 11-13 years explore all the information and taking courses in different and important fields. For example, I learnt Russian from the second class, and English from the fourth class, and when I compare that two languages’ knowledge it is obvious that Russian seem much more easier than English. Unfortunately, I did not have opportunity commence learning English from second class too, and I think that these two years later have been enormous affect(verb) effect in my knowledge in English. Secondly, in primary school students have a lot of time, they are not thinking about work or about some family problems, and the mainly(main) part of their time they spend for learning while secondary schools students are mature residents and their time schedule is very busy. Time specter is a partial but the more important part for learning languages because you need to read more, speak with your friends and spend a lot of time for sawing(watching) video materials. For instance, my friend prepared(taking some ) learning French from 16 to 18 but he had not(didn’t have) good results because of(due to) time lack(lack of time), at the same time he was learning at school, and was working in café. In conclusion, knowing well any foreign language it means that you have one additional profession. It is a key which can open many mysterious doors. Undeniably, in youth times it is a very important learning times and methods therefore we can use our natural possibilities and free time for learning languages which can improve our life quality. And there are(is) an old Armenian proverb which said that ”The more languages you know, the more human you are”.
This topic is about that
some
specialists find out that it is better for children
learning
foreign
language
at primary
school
than secondary
school
. Nowadays, in globalization
times
, knowing
foreign
languages
is an essential
skill
, which
helps
person in
different
areas. In my opinion, I
undoubtedly
consent to the statement that upwards are higher than downwards and there are two reasons.
First
, youth’s brains taking new knowledge
very
quickly
, second in primary
school
they have more free
time
rather
secondary
school
. I will explore in the following paragraph.

To
begin
with, there are scientists
researche
that young person learns new things
very
easy(
easily
), and they do not
have to
suffer for
learning
languages
. It is fact that in our
times
the English
language
has become the dominant
foreign
language
in all the world and it is
very
easy to find finding necessary information in English. Over 70% of internet materials are in English. Children who
learning
foreign
language
earlier have
given
opportunity from 11-13 years explore all the information and taking courses in
different
and
important
fields.
For example
, I
learnt
Russian from the second
class
, and English from the fourth
class
, and when I compare that two
languages’
knowledge it is obvious that Russian seem much
more easier
than English. Unfortunately, I did not have opportunity commence
learning
English from second
class
too, and I
think
that these two years later have been enormous affect(verb) effect in my knowledge in English.

Secondly
, in primary
school
students have
a lot of
time
, they are not thinking about work or about
some
family problems, and the
mainly
(main) part of their
time
they spend for
learning
while secondary
schools
students are mature residents and their
time
schedule is
very
busy.
Time
specter is a partial
but
the more
important
part for
learning
languages
because
you need to read more, speak with your friends and spend
a lot of
time
for sawing(watching) video materials.
For instance
, my friend prepared(taking
some
)
learning
French from 16 to 18
but
he had not(didn’t have)
good
results
because
of(due to)
time
lack(lack of
time)
, at the same
time
he was
learning
at
school
, and was working in café.

In conclusion
, knowing well any
foreign
language
it means that you have one additional profession. It is a key which can open
many
mysterious doors.
Undeniably
, in youth
times
it is a
very
important
learning
times
and methods
therefore
we can
use
our natural possibilities and free
time
for
learning
languages
which can
improve
our life quality. And there are(is) an
old
Armenian proverb which said that
”The
more
languages
you know, the more human you are”.
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IELTS essay Some experts believe that it is better for the children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (

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