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Some executives are given high salaries what are the advantages of giving higher salary ? Why there should be no specific capping on salaries of employees?

Some executives are given high salaries what are the advantages of giving higher salary? Why there should be no specific capping on salaries of employees? eEM9V
Nowadays certain professionals earn high salary package which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many individuals it is beneficial in substantial influence of this trend has spark the controversy over the potential impact in recent years this essay shall hash out both the points Analysing the statement and explaining further the first and foremost reason is that the handsome salary package to employees would be beneficial for them as well as nation. To start with workers when the receive Tremendously high salary they can get pleasure owing to this they get motivation. Moreover They would paying taxes to government would lead to economic prospects if they attain high salary they can become backbone For country. what is more wealthy individuals always look for new establishment they can introduce new prosperties for youngster. However employer should not allow salary at certain level it would be hard for employers as well as for government because they could not give equal salary to everyone because they do not to do hard work even they discouraged to do work furthermore experienced and amateur are not give proper attention on their valued work In some countries Paying based on gender as female work more than males and they get low salary because employers capped the salary according to gender it is wrong. In conclusion although there must not allow the Limited salary It would be hazardous while employees will discourage to do hard work
Nowadays certain professionals earn high
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salary
package which was always debatable has
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now
become more controversial with
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many
individuals it is beneficial in substantial influence of this trend has
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spark
the controversy over the potential impact in recent years this essay shall hash out both the points
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Analysing
the statement and explaining
further
the
first
and foremost reason is that the handsome
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salary
package to employees would be beneficial for them
as well
as nation. To
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start
with workers when the
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receive
Tremendously
high
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salary
they can
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get
pleasure owing to this they
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get
motivation.
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Moreover
They would
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paying
taxes to
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government
would lead to economic prospects if they attain high
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salary
they can become backbone For country.
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what
is more wealthy individuals always look for new establishment they can introduce new
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prosperties
for youngster.
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However
employer should not
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allow
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salary
at certain level it would be
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hard
for employers
as well
as for
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government
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because
they could not give equal
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salary
to everyone
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because
they do not to do
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hard
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work
even they discouraged to do
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work
furthermore
experienced and amateur are not give proper attention on their valued
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work
In
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some
countries Paying based on gender as female
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work
more than
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males and
they
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get
low
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salary
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because
employers capped the
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salary
according to gender it is
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wrong
.
In conclusion
although there
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must
not
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allow
the Limited
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salary
It would be hazardous while employees will discourage to do
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hard
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work
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IELTS essay Some executives are given high salaries what are the advantages of giving higher salary? Why there should be no specific capping on salaries of employees?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
241 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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