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What is the economic situation in Vietnam at the moment?

What is the economic situation in Vietnam at the moment? gAMeO
At the moment, the economics of Vietnam is going through a harsh stage, the government try hard to set society’s mind at rest, make an effort to improve the economy, control the inflate rate and increase the budget to support the population and the business. For the economics, a large number of businesses go bankrupt due to covid-19 pandemic. On the other hand, online shopping platform is steadily increasing bring about delivery services too.
At the moment, the economics of Vietnam is going through a harsh stage, the
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government
try
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hard
to set society’s mind at rest,
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make
an effort to
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improve
the economy, control
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the inflate
rate and increase the budget to support the population and the business. For the economics,
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a large number of
businesses go bankrupt due to
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covid-19
pandemic.
On the other hand
, online shopping platform is
steadily
increasing bring about delivery services too.

IELTS essay What is the economic situation in Vietnam at the moment?

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