Nowadays, shopping has become a very common trend and it is a positive change as this gives a sense of satisfaction and self-reliance to people.
The increasing tendency of people going to shopping has many positive effects as they may feel pleasure and a sense of satisfaction. The shopping gives them the feeling that the money, they have earned via serious hard work is not going wasted, instead they are spending it for themselves. For example, a common observation is people are not much delighted when wearing a new dress compared to when purchasing it. Moreover, it gives them a sense of independence, which probably is the best feeling in the world. They feel that they can fulfil most of the requirements of their life. Hence shopping has been a very positive development over the years.
The increased trend of shopping may have some negative impacts as well. It has been observed that some people while shopping get too much excited and spend beyond their budget. Since, the majority of people are making payments via credit card so actually they may not judge, that they are crossing the lines of saving. They realize about it when they reach home and then rest of the month is spent with difficulty. However, this tendency can be curbed either by strictly paying cash while shopping or having limits on credit card transaction from the bank.
In conclusion, increase in shopping has been a very positive development with minor drawbacks which can easily be controlled if adequate measures are taken
Nowadays,
shopping
has become a
very
common trend and it is a
positive
change
as this gives a sense of satisfaction and self-reliance to
people
.
The increasing tendency of
people
going to
shopping
has
many
positive
effects as they may feel pleasure and a sense of satisfaction. The
shopping
gives them the feeling that the money, they have earned via serious
hard
work is not going wasted,
instead
they are
spending it for
themselves.
For example
, a common observation is
people
are not much delighted when wearing a new dress compared to when purchasing it.
Moreover
, it gives them a sense of independence, which
probably
is the best feeling in the world. They feel that they can fulfil most of the requirements of their life.
Hence
shopping
has been a
very
positive
development over the years.
The increased trend of
shopping
may have
some
negative
impacts
as well
. It has
been observed
that
some
people
while
shopping
get
too much excited and spend beyond their budget. Since, the majority of
people
are making payments via credit card
so
actually they may not judge, that they are crossing the lines of saving. They realize about it when they reach home and then rest of the month
is spent
with difficulty.
However
, this tendency can
be curbed
either by
strictly
paying cash while
shopping
or having limits on credit card transaction from the bank.
In conclusion
, increase in
shopping
has been a
very
positive
development with minor drawbacks which can
easily
be controlled
if adequate measures
are taken
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes