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Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disgaree

Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disgaree e8pkJ
Being sociable are extremely significant to impress anyone. So nowadays, companies of offices are looking for such candidates who are highly qualified along with good social bond with customers. I believe it is addition advantages if such employees are recurited in jobs. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor. First and foremost, qualifications do-not provide an amiable behavior to customer. To deal with customer an amiable kinds of employee is necessary. So for that, majority of employers seek staff who can easily feel and make visitors comfortable and give confidence to work with them. For instance; if a staff have master degree but he or she do not have basic discipline to communicates with customers, then it would make any kinds of advantages to organizations. Therefore, education is not ample to be a wise and good human beings and such traits are now entreprises are looking for their companies. Shifting towards school of second thought, in an organizations there are numerous tasks to handle and in such scenario employees may not be able to tackle it but if employees have good communicating skills then they will easily handle any kind of daunting tasks. Moreover, staff will social skill and brilliant qualification is a diamond for the organizations because such staff can convense their customer to purchase or deal with them. In conclusion, I strongly believe that social skill along with good educational background provides serval profits to their business and support to achieve their goal.
Being sociable are
extremely
significant to impress anyone.
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So
nowadays,
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companies
of offices are looking for such candidates who are
highly
qualified along with
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good
social bond with
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customers
. I believe it is addition advantages if such
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employees
are
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recurited
in jobs.

To commence with the
first
notion, there are myriad things to
be shared
in its favor.
First
and foremost, qualifications do-not provide an amiable behavior to
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customer
. To deal with
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customer
an amiable
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kinds
of
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employee
is necessary.
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So
for that, majority of employers seek
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staff
who can
easily
feel and
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make
visitors comfortable and give confidence to work with them.
For instance
; if a
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staff
have master degree
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but
he or she
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do
not have basic discipline to communicates with
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customers
, then it would
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make
any kinds of advantages to organizations.
Therefore
, education is not ample to be a wise and
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good
human beings and such traits are
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now
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entreprises
are looking for their
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companies
.

Shifting towards school of second
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thought
, in
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an organizations
there are numerous tasks to handle and in such scenario
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employees
may not be able to tackle it
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but
if
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employees
have
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good
communicating
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skills
then they will
easily
handle any kind of daunting tasks.
Moreover
,
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staff
will social
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skill
and brilliant qualification is a diamond for the organizations
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because
such
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staff
can
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convense
their
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customer
to
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purchase
or deal with them.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that social
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skill
along with
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good
educational background provides
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serval
profits to their business and support to achieve their goal.
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IELTS essay Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disgaree

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  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
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