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Some countries spent a lot money on providing world-class sports facilities for training youngsters.

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Sport is verry important itself. Athletes that play different kind of sports make living out of it. There are many people, that love doing it, so it's verry good, that they can make it their proffesion. The other good thing about sport is that the ordinary person enjoys it too. Many are are relaxing when they go or watch some sport. Athletes are healthy and are constantly moving and doing exersices, that make their body better and stronger. They eat healthy and they take a good care of themselfs. The lifestyle they have is full of physical trainings. Also they know how to take a good rest. Athletes feel theyr body and know how to take good care of it, which is importnt in order to live a healthy life.
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IELTS essay Some countries spent a lot money on providing world-class sports facilities for training youngsters.

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