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Some countries reduce inner city traffic by increasing public transport Others impose a tax on people who drive in the city v.1

Some countries reduce inner city traffic by increasing public transport Others impose a tax on people who drive in the city v. 1
Few countries are taking measures to reduce traffic congestion by imposing a tax on people who drive in the city and encouraging people to use public transport instead. This essay will firstly discuss, how usage of more public transport will benefit the country as the biggest advantage. Secondly, how forcing people to pay a high tax for driving the car as a disadvantage. Due to the increase in population, people are facing many adverse effects on the environment. One such thing is air pollution. When people use their own vehicle for commute, they are explicitly contributing to traffic, which in turn causes more air pollution. Instead, if people use public transport, traffic congestion can be controlled and making the environment more reliable place to live. On the other hand, imposing the tax may benefit the government but not for the people. Places where public transport is not of high frequency, people are forced to use their own vehicle and for the local commute, people cannot rely on public transport all the time. People with low monthly wages will suffer a lot, due to the increase in the tax, as this will be an additional cost to them. In conclusion, using more public transport is a really good plan to reduce traffic but the government should address those issues before imposing the tax, so people from different classes will get benefited.
Few countries are taking measures to
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reduce
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traffic
congestion by imposing a
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tax
on
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people
who drive in the city and encouraging
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people
to
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use
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public
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transport
instead
. This essay will
firstly
discuss, how usage of more
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public
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transport
will benefit the country as the biggest advantage.
Secondly
, how forcing
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people
to pay a high
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tax
for driving the car as a disadvantage.

Due to the increase in population,
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people
are facing
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many
adverse effects on the environment. One such thing is air pollution. When
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people
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use
their
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own
vehicle for commute, they are
explicitly
contributing to
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traffic
, which in turn causes more air pollution.
Instead
, if
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people
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use
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public
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transport
,
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traffic
congestion can
be controlled
and making the environment more reliable place to
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live
.

On the other hand
, imposing the
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tax
may benefit the
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government
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but
not for the
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people
. Places where
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public
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transport
is not of high frequency,
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people
are forced
to
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use
their
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vehicle and for the local commute,
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people
cannot rely on
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public
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transport
all the time.
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People
with low monthly wages will suffer a lot, due to the increase in the
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tax
, as this will be an additional cost to them.

In conclusion
, using more
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public
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transport
is a
really
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good
plan to
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reduce
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traffic
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but
the
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government
should address those issues
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before
imposing the
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tax
,
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so
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people
from
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different
classes will
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get
benefited.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some countries reduce inner city traffic by increasing public transport Others impose a tax on people who drive in the city v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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