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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v.1

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v. 1
One of the burning questions about these days is whether to buy your home or to rent them. A lot of individuals would support the idea of purchasing their house, while advocates for renting a place for living has been in the rise for the last few decades. This essay will discuss the benefits and problems of renting where you’d live. The foremost issue people have with taking up a place on rent is that, you do not own the house. As such, you do not feel the house to be truly yours. Also, as you only get to stay for a certain monthly payment, you cannot certain things. You may want to install an air conditioner, or you may want to bring down a wall in order to make a room bigger; but you are not allowed to do that without the consent of the landlord. The lack of authority and ownership over the place you and your family call home, makes people to save up for buying a house for themselves. However, as opposed to buying, renting your house means you are actually saving up a lot of money over housing. The study showed Millenials prefer to travel to places rather to spend all of their money on a house. In addition to that, as you do not own the place, you can shift to another place, should there be any need to do so. That means you do not have to stick to a certain place for your lifetime and can use the additional money you saved over housing on traveling. This appeals more to the Millenials and hence the current shift towards renting houses. To conclude, renting your house has both pros and cons. And whether you’d ignore the issues related to renting and would choose to stay as a tenant actually comes to your own personal priorities neccessities.
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idea
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renting
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place
for living has been in the rise for the last few decades. This essay will discuss the benefits and problems of
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renting
where you’d
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live
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people
have with taking up a
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place
on rent is that, you do not
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own
the
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house
. As such, you do not feel the
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house
to be
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to stay for a certain monthly payment, you
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but
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allowed
to do that without the consent of the landlord. The lack of authority and ownership over the
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you and your family call home,
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to save up for buying a
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for themselves.

However
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your
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house
means you are actually saving up
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a lot of
money over housing. The study
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showed
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Millenials
prefer to travel to
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rather
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house
.
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to that, as you do not
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, you can shift to another
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place
, should there be any need to do
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. That means you do not
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have to
stick to a certain
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for your lifetime and can
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the additional money you saved over housing on traveling. This appeals more to the
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Millenials
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houses
.

To conclude
,
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your
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has both pros and cons. And whether you’d
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ignore
the issues related to
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and would choose to stay as a tenant actually
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to your
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personal priorities
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neccessities
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IELTS essay In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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