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Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of of wearing uniform? v.9

Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of of wearing uniform? v. 9
It has become a debatable issue that business corporations and associations are demanding their staffs to attire in uniforms while coming to work. While wearing a homogeneous dress has many positives, its negatives should not be underestimated. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of a constant attire. On the one hand, the purpose of dressing in inflexible apparel will benefit the company by giving itself a professional and executive look. This will help their clients to easily build a sense of trust. Also, the employees working in the systematic costume end up being a walking advertisement for that particular organization. As a result, the corporation will get more exposure and publicity which can favour them in maintaining a better relationship with their customers. Moreover, for professionals like doctor, engineer, pharmacist and nurses, a steady dress code is a part of their dignity and it glorifies their profession. For instance, nurses in white uniform can be easily identified and is considered by some as angels on earth. On the other hand, one of the main disadvantages of wearing systematic attire is that the employees may have a feeling of dissatisfaction, especially when the public stares at them while going to work. This can create an awkwardness and make them unhappy. Another negative is that the company may provide them workwear stitched with poor quality of material. This will make staff uncomfortable while working which may affect their happiness and productivity. For example, employees working outdoors should be provided with workwear that is waterproof, warm and breathable. But the companies may opt for cheap quality material, thus making the employees uncomfortable. To summarize, homogenous workwear gives the feeling of teamwork and benefits the companies and organizations in its growth. At the same time, considering the employees mental satisfaction is necessary as they are the pillars of every corporation and associations. So it is mandatory to give the freedom of wearing formal dress at least once a week.
It has become a debatable issue that business corporations and associations are demanding their staffs to attire in uniforms while coming to work. While wearing a homogeneous dress has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
positives, its negatives should not
be underestimated
. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of a constant attire.

On the one hand, the purpose of dressing in inflexible apparel will benefit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
by giving itself a professional and executive look. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
their clients to
easily
build a sense of trust.
Also
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
working in the systematic costume
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
up being a walking advertisement for that particular organization.
As a result
, the corporation will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more exposure and publicity which can
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favour
them in maintaining a better relationship with their customers.
Moreover
, for professionals like doctor, engineer, pharmacist and nurses, a steady dress code is a part of their dignity and it glorifies their profession.
For instance
, nurses in white uniform can be
easily
identified and
is considered
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
as angels on earth.

On the other hand
, one of the main disadvantages of wearing systematic attire is that the
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employees
may have a feeling of dissatisfaction,
especially
when the public stares at them while going to work. This can create an awkwardness and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them unhappy. Another
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
is that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
may provide them workwear stitched with poor quality of material. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
staff uncomfortable while working which may affect their happiness and productivity.
For example
,
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employees
working outdoors should
be provided
with workwear
that is
waterproof, warm and breathable.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the
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companies
may opt for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
quality material,
thus
making the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
uncomfortable.

To summarize
,
Do not mix variants of the same word ('homogenous' and 'homogeneous') within a single text.
homogenous
workwear gives the feeling of teamwork and benefits the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
and organizations in its growth. At the same time, considering the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
mental satisfaction is necessary as they are the pillars of every corporation and associations.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
it is mandatory to give the freedom of wearing formal dress at least once a week.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of of wearing uniform? v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
9
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 9.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 9.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 9.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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