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Some children find some subjects as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult to learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undeniably, education is an essential thing for everyone. This is the only thing which helps us to survive in a long run of life. However, a number of children say that some subjects like Mathematics and Philosophy are too hard to study, that's why some indiviuals said that those subjects should not be compulsory for students. I agree to some extent to this statement. The following are the points which will elaborate my viewpoint.

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, education is an essential thing for everyone. This is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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helps
 us to survive in a long run of life. However
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some
 subjects like Mathematics and Philosophy are too This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to study, that's why This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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indiviuals
 said that those subjects should not be compulsory for students. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extent to this statement. The following are the points which will elaborate my viewpoint. 