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SOME BELIEVE THAT PEOPLE WILL PURCHASE A PRODUCT BASED ON THEIR NEEDS AND ADVERTISING IS NOT NEEED . TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

SOME BELIEVE THAT PEOPLE WILL PURCHASE A PRODUCT BASED ON THEIR NEEDS AND ADVERTISING IS NOT NEEED. R2Mpk
PERSONS WILL DEPEND UPON THRIE REQUIREMENTS TO BUY THEIR THING AND ADVERTISING IS NOT ESSENTIAL ACCORDING TO SOME MASSES. AND, I AM TOTALLY AGREE WITH THE GIVEN STATEMENT BECAUSE IT HAS A POSITIVE VIEW. ON THE ONE HAND, PEOPLE WILL PURCHASE A PRODUCT BASED ON THEIR NEEDS. THERE ARE SEVERAL REASON BUT FIRST IS, PEOPLE CAN SAVE THEIR MONEY AND TIME WHEN THEY BUYING USEFUL THINGS. FOR EXAMPLE, TO PURCHASING THE THINGS, PEOPLE ARE GOING TO MARKET ON DAILY BASIS, WHEN THEY SEE THE ADVERTISE. THEY ARE WASTING THEIR TIME AND MONEY TO SELECT AND BUY THE UNUSUAL THINGS. THEREFORE, MASSES CAN BUY ONLY USEFUL GOODS AND SAVE THEIR SALARY. ON THE OTHER HAND, WHEN THE PERSON BUY A THINGS TO SEE THE ADVERTISE THEN THOSE THINGS ARE NOT NECSSARY FOR THE INDIVIDUSALS. AFTER SOMETIME, PEOPLE CANNOT USE THAT THINGS AND THESE ARE MAKING A WASTAGE OF MONEY. FOR INSTANCE, SUPPOSE ONE INDIVIDUAL WAS BOUGHT A NEW KITHCHEN SET TO SAW THE ADVERTISING BUT THEY HAVE ALREADY OTHER KITCHEN SET. THEN, THAT PERSON STORE A NEW KITHCHEN SET AT SAFE PLACE AND AFTER SOME YEARS, THAT WAS BROKEDOWN AND THAT IS WHY THAT ARTICLE WAS NOT HELPFUL FOR THAT MASS. THEREFUL, IT WAS MADE A WASTAGE OF MONEY AND INCOME. IN CONCLUSION, ALTHOUGH THE PEOPLE WILL SAVE THEIR MONEY AND TIME TO BUY REQUIRED THINGS, THEY ALSO STORE THE UNNECSSARY ARTICLES OR DO THE WASATING OF GOODS.
PERSONS WILL DEPEND UPON
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THRIE
REQUIREMENTS TO
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BUY
THEIR THING AND ADVERTISING IS NOT ESSENTIAL ACCORDING TO
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SOME
MASSES. AND, I AM
TOTALLY
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AGREE
WITH THE
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GIVEN
STATEMENT
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BECAUSE
IT HAS A
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POSITIVE
VIEW.

ON THE ONE HAND,
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PEOPLE
WILL
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PURCHASE
A PRODUCT BASED ON THEIR NEEDS. THERE ARE
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SEVERAL REASON
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BUT
FIRST
IS,
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PEOPLE
CAN SAVE THEIR
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MONEY
AND TIME WHEN
Did you mean "THEY're BUYING", "THEY are BUYING", or "THEY were BUYING"?
THEY BUYING
USEFUL THINGS.
FOR EXAMPLE
, TO PURCHASING THE THINGS,
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PEOPLE
ARE GOING TO MARKET ON DAILY BASIS, WHEN THEY
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SEE
THE
The word 'ADVERTISE' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "advertisement"?
ADVERTISE
. THEY ARE WASTING THEIR TIME AND
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MONEY
TO SELECT AND
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BUY
THE UNUSUAL THINGS.
THEREFORE
, MASSES CAN
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BUY
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ONLY
USEFUL
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GOODS
AND SAVE THEIR SALARY.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, WHEN THE PERSON
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BUY
A THINGS TO
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SEE
THE
The word 'ADVERTISE' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "advertisement"?
ADVERTISE
THEN THOSE THINGS ARE NOT
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NECSSARY
FOR THE
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INDIVIDUSALS
. AFTER SOMETIME,
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PEOPLE
CANNOT
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USE
THAT THINGS AND THESE ARE MAKING A WASTAGE OF
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MONEY
.
FOR INSTANCE
, SUPPOSE ONE INDIVIDUAL WAS
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BOUGHT
A NEW
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KITHCHEN
SET TO
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SAW
THE ADVERTISING
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BUT
THEY HAVE ALREADY OTHER KITCHEN SET. THEN, THAT PERSON STORE A NEW
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KITHCHEN
SET AT SAFE PLACE AND AFTER
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SOME
YEARS, THAT WAS
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BROKEDOWN
AND
THAT IS
WHY THAT ARTICLE WAS NOT HELPFUL FOR THAT MASS.
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THEREFUL
, IT
WAS MADE
A WASTAGE OF
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MONEY
AND INCOME.

IN CONCLUSION
, ALTHOUGH THE
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PEOPLE
WILL SAVE THEIR
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MONEY
AND TIME TO
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BUY
REQUIRED THINGS, THEY
ALSO
STORE THE
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UNNECSSARY
ARTICLES OR DO THE
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WASATING
OF
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GOODS
.
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IELTS essay SOME BELIEVE THAT PEOPLE WILL PURCHASE A PRODUCT BASED ON THEIR NEEDS AND ADVERTISING IS NOT NEEED.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
237 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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