Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. koYn

Offenses are highly prevalent these days. Due to this, there are some who insist that there must be increased measures to avoid those. While others do believe that it is addressed properly now. This essay will give light to both issues and provide my own opinion. To begin with, crimes comes in many forms. As a result, many people would like to raise the steps in order for this to diminish. Indeed, crimes can be related to variety of things causing destruction on an individual's life aspect. Murder, rape, theft, felony, fraud are among the crimes that we hear everyday in the news and these crimes highly affect people by producing fear and huge anxiety about their security. Most of the time, these emotions also causes mental problems to individual having them develop paranoia. As of today, crimes are being punished under the law of our justice system. On the other hand, people do think that these are addressed properly. As other offenders, are sentenced to jail, death or even punished in various ways. In my opinion, crimes until now are not tackled properly especially with the justice system. To conclude. Crimes are not addressed in ways. However, In my view, the only way we can address is crime is if we produce more people to ensure our safety and level up our security with those we can expect that all people will be highly functional not thinking about any destruction possible to happen. T

Offenses are highly
 prevalent these days. Due to this, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 who insist that there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be increased
 measures to avoid those. While others do believe that it is addressed
properly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. This essay will give light to both issues and provide my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 opinion.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 forms. As a result
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 would like to raise the steps in order for this to diminish. Indeed
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
 can be related
 to variety of things causing destruction on an individual's life aspect. Murder, rape, theft, felony, fraud are among the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
 that we hear 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 in the news and these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
highly
 affect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 by producing fear and huge anxiety about their security. Most of the time, these emotions also
 causes mental problems to individual having them develop paranoia. As of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
 are being punished
 under the law of our justice system.

On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that these are addressed
properly
. As other offenders, are sentenced
 to jail, death or even punished in various ways. In my opinion, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
 until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 are not tackled properly
especially
 with the justice system.

To conclude
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
Crimes
 are not addressed in ways. However
, In my view, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 way we can address is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
 is if we produce more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to ensure our safety and level up our security with those we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 that all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 will be highly
 functional not thinking about any destruction possible to happen.

T