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Some believe moral values should be taught by parents. To what extent do you agree?

Some believe moral values should be taught by parents. 7PjM2
Moral value lays the persons impressions of personality, which makes him to outstand in groups. It is offen taken into controversial ideology that they should be taught by his caretaker, and I completely agree with this analogy. To begin child, spend most of time with them, so he observe their behaviour, and think, start utilizing it from beginning about it by keeping an conditions in his mains that might be same type of behaviour need in outside world as they had at home to succeed, hence in end trying to copy. for example treatment of parents with grandparents- might think treat elders with same respect or privacy Apart from this, parents are childs first companies from birth, so they knows about his like or taste which could be useful in teaching a lesson accordingly. This could help to lay the roots of whole incident deeply in life, making critical impact upon thinking before performing the same acts repeatedly like a child keeps on touching others food with his bare, dirty hand and his mom can cook a favourite sandwich then touch it with some dirty particles on her hands sandwich destroying the whole taste. Hence neutralizing the act. In conclusion, I would like to restate my opinion that parents are child’s best teacher as they almost in detail about his significant characters which can be changed accordingly through their analogy.
Moral value lays the persons impressions of personality, which
makes
him to
outstand
in groups. It is
offen
taken into controversial ideology that they should
be taught
by his caretaker, and I completely
agree
with this analogy.

To
begin
child
, spend
most of time
with them,
so
he
observe
their
behaviour
, and
think
,
start
utilizing it from beginning about it by keeping
an conditions
in his mains that might be same type of
behaviour
need in outside world as they had at home to succeed,
hence
in
end
trying to copy.
for
example treatment of parents with grandparents- might
think
treat elders with same respect or
privacy


Apart from this, parents are
childs
first
companies
from birth,
so
they
knows
about his like or taste which could be useful in teaching a lesson
accordingly
. This could
help
to lay the roots of whole incident
deeply
in life, making critical impact upon thinking
before
performing the same acts
repeatedly
like a
child
keeps
on touching
others
food with his bare, dirty hand and his mom can cook a
favourite
sandwich then touch it with
some
dirty particles on her hands sandwich destroying the whole taste.
Hence
neutralizing the act.

In conclusion
, I would like to restate my opinion that parents are
child’s
best teacher as they almost in detail about his significant characters which can be
changed
accordingly
through their analogy.
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IELTS essay Some believe moral values should be taught by parents.

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