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I prefer a group of friends, because if you have one particular friend, it is likely that you may get bored of each other after a while. I like having chit chat with them, watching tv series and talking about these together. we even like to sit together with them without doing sometihing specific. It depends on whether you still have some common points. If no, it does not make sense to try to maintain this friendship, but if it is the opposite, you should try to maintain it. The most important thing in a friend is that he/she should has good character traits, because I want to someone who I spend much time has good traits so I can trust him/her and feel comfortable with him/her. I want to talk about how I started law school. At first, I was studying economics, because I didn't get enough score to enter into the law school that I wanted to. After starting studying economics, I decided to take the university entry exam again, but i was not quite sure that I would get enough score this time so I needed to study for both economics courses and the university exam. I was unable to find spare time for myself that year. It was stressful and tiring experience for me, but at the end I achieved my goal, and quited economics and started studying law For example, if you are a senior year student in high school, you need to decide which course you will study in the university. It is important, because it determines what business you will engage with, what kind of people you will be around It depends on whether you have enough experiences to decide. If no, it is better to get advice from parents, becuase they are possibly have some experiences, and they can project what what a decision may bring. I think some people are just not totally sure about their decisions, so they are looking for some supporters so that they can feel secured about their decisions.

I prefer a group of friends, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if you have one particular friend, it is likely that you may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
In standard English it's more accepted to use "bored with" or "bored by".bored withbored by
bored of
 each other after a while.

I like having This word is normally spelled with hyphen.chit-chat
chit chat
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tv
 series and talking about these together. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
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sometihing
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It depends on whether you still
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some
 common points. If no, it does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sense to try to maintain this friendship, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if it is the opposite, you should try to maintain it.

The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing in a friend is that he/she should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "have"have
has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 character traits, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to someone who I spend much time has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 traits This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can trust him/her and feel comfortable with him/her.

I want to talk about how I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 law school. At first
, I was studying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessfinancesocial science
economics
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 score to enter into the law school that I wanted to. After starting studying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessfinancesocial science
economics
, I decided to take the university entry exam again, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
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get
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enough
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so
 I needed to study for both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessfinancesocial science
economics
 courses and the university exam. I was unable to find spare time for myself that year. It was stressful and tiring experience for me, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 I achieved my goal, and Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "quit", the past tense form of the verb 'quit'?quitquitequotedsuitedquietedquilted
quited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessfinancesocial science
economics
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 studying law

For example
, if you are a senior year student in high school, you need to decide which course you will study in the university. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it determines what business you will engage with, what kind of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 you will be around

It depends on whether you have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 experiences to decide. If no, it is better to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 advice from parents, Possible spelling mistake found.because
becuase
 they are possibly
Consider using a past participle here: "had".had
have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experiences, and they can project Possible typo: you repeated a wordwhat
what what
 a decision may bring.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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some
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people
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 not totally
 sure about their decisions, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they are looking for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 supporters This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can feel secured about their decisions. 