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Some animal shelters put down unwanted pets to end their lives humanely if the are unadopted after some time. Do you agree or disagree with this practice?

Some animal shelters put down unwanted pets to end their lives humanely if the are unadopted after some time. with this practice? oV6VB
I strongly and firmly disagree with the practise to end pets’ lives humanely if they remain unadopted. I believe all pets deserve to live, no matter if they are wanted or not. First of all, if shelters decide that they want to help animals, hey are doing it because they want to save a pets life and would like them to live a good life. If thy take in those animals, just for them to be killed eventually after a few month time, then I would say, why not just leave them in dumpster or the drain, where they were first found. They would be wasting resources on them, but after that, killing them. For the welfare of other animal’s’, an excuse which they commonly use as the rightful reason to do this, would be to simple not accept these animals in the first place. They would be better off in the streets or just dead. At least then they wouldn’t have to go through all the pain, just to die anyway. I think that the shelters could, instead of euthanizing them, neuter them then, release them back to the streets, if they were never a nuisance to begin with and are merely hurt or trapped. If the residents around are annoyed by the presence of stray, the shelter should take them regardless of if they are going to be adopted, or how long they have stayed. After all, the shelter should have accounted for such costs, and the animals are still a life. We shouldn’t decide for them if they should live or not. It should be up to the animal itself, if it were to come to such a choice. Therefore, I would rather release it back to where it were before, and let the animal decided for itself. To conclude, I oppose strongly to ending unwanted pets’ lives. They should be allowed to live, and it should be the duty and obligation of the shelter to ensure, they have the sufficient resources for the animal before they take it in.
I
strongly
and
firmly
disagree with the
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to
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end
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pets’
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lives
humanely
if they remain
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unadopted
. I believe all
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pets
deserve to
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live
, no matter if they
are wanted
or not.

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First of all
, if
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shelters
decide that they want to
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help
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animals
, hey are doing it
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because
they want to save a
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pets
life and would like them to
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live
a
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good
life. If thy take in those
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animals
,
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just
for them to
be killed
eventually
after a few month time, then I would say, why not
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just
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leave
them in dumpster or the drain, where they were
first
found. They would be wasting resources on them,
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but
after that, killing them. For the welfare of other
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animal’s’
, an excuse which they
commonly
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use
as the rightful reason to do this, would be to simple not accept these
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animals
in the
first
place. They would be better off in the streets or
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just
dead. At least then they wouldn’t
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have to
go through all the pain,
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just
to
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die
anyway.

I
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think
that the
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shelters
could,
instead
of euthanizing them, neuter them then, release them back to the streets, if they were never a nuisance to
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begin
with and are
merely
hurt or trapped. If the residents around
are annoyed
by the presence of stray, the
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shelter
should take them regardless of if they are going to
be adopted
, or how long they have stayed.
After all
, the
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shelter
should have accounted for such costs, and the
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animals
are
still
a life. We shouldn’t decide for them if they should
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live
or not. It should be up to the
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animal
itself, if it were to
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come
to such a choice.
Therefore
, I would
rather
release it back to where it were
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before
, and
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let
the
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animal
decided for itself.

To conclude
, I oppose
strongly
to ending unwanted
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pets’
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lives
. They should be
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allowed
to
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live
, and it should be the duty and obligation of the
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shelter
to ensure, they have the sufficient resources for the
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animal
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
they take it in.
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IELTS essay Some animal shelters put down unwanted pets to end their lives humanely if the are unadopted after some time. with this practice?

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