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why a lot of people choose work online than traditional way

why a lot of people choose work online than traditional way Ry25V
A diferent majority workers alter traditional way to distance type of work. Well if labors choose online type of work they would have some convinient for themselves to illustrate they can spend their time with benefits like spend with children and also they will can work with more comfortables than in a office one of the usefull things will be clothes they can wear costum more comfortable than uniform, Secondly more benefits fantastic example work on the bed and eat more natural foods as well as they have a loads of free for relationships and prepare natural meals, and they can spend time to themselves or develop fitness labors will have improve their hobbies and some thing like that. However also as caoin has two diferent sides, we have bad sides well one of the bad side is children can intorupt when we work distance such as youngers will wanted eat or play, wolking and also learn some thing. At that time worker will lost more nervious than at work or office. And also It would depend to their career becouse of if indors work destance they cannot work very well like at the work office. In conclusion, majority of workers choose work online for develop realtionship with family
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their hobbies and
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IELTS essay why a lot of people choose work online than traditional way

Essay
  American English
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208 words
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