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Solving environmental pollution both on a domestic and international level

Solving environmental pollution both on a domestic and international level 0BVO1

In this essay, let us find out a solution on solving environmental pollution on a domestic and international level. First of all, pollution is one of the ongoing concerns in most of the countries due to the increased population. Out of all the 3 pollutions, water and air are being polluted majorly by the fellow human beings and these can be evaded or at least reduced considerably with few self measures. One of the primary reason for the air pollution is the number of vehicles in the country. Now a days every family has more than one car. Even worse where few houses have a car for every family member. This emits a lot of carbon outside and creates air pollution. Secondly, the trees are de-forested where the capacity of these carbons being observed has become less.

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 us find out a solution on solving environmental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
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pollution
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