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How do you see yourself? How do others see you?

How do you see yourself? How do others see you? g8rm7
Sometimes, we must think about ourselves and our personality. This work help us to remember our negative and positive features and then try to improve the good things and decrease the bad ones. I believe that we must see ourselves with a challenging view. This view caused we are being far from self-satisfied feature. If I want to describe myself based on the above view, I am a hard-working person and always try to have a plan and aim in my life. About my relationship, I have an intermediate level in relation with other. Also I'm laughing person and always try to create funny time. Another my negative feature is thinking more about a topic. In some cases, I asked others about myself and based on their opinions, I will try to correct myself. Because, I think a best friend can be liked as a mirror and the same as the mirror can tell the right things about my personality. The first thing that everyone say about me is thinking more time and less speaking. The other comment is related to my relationship and confirmed my opinion that I said in the above. Besides, they encourage my hard-working. Thus, it is a good idea that we see ourselves from our and others view and compare the comments. Based on the feedback which can be given from their comment, we have this chance to get better and enjoy our life.
Sometimes
, we
must
think
about ourselves and our personality. This work
help
us to remember our
negative
and
positive
features and then try to
improve
the
good
things and decrease the
bad
ones. I believe that we
must
see
ourselves with a challenging
view
. This
view
caused we are being far from self-satisfied feature.

If I want to
describe
myself based on the above
view
, I am a
hard
-working person and always try to have a plan and aim in my life. About my relationship, I have an intermediate level in relation with
other
.
Also
I'm laughing person and always try to create
funny
time. Another my
negative
feature is thinking more about a topic.

In
some
cases, I asked others about myself and based on their opinions, I will try to correct myself.
Because
, I
think
a
best friend can
be liked
as a mirror and the same as the mirror can
tell
the right things about my personality. The
first
thing that everyone say about me is thinking more time and less speaking. The
other
comment
is related
to my relationship and confirmed my opinion that I said in the above.
Besides
, they encourage my
hard
-working.

Thus
, it is a
good
idea
that we
see
ourselves from our
and others
view
and compare the comments. Based on the feedback which can be
given
from their comment, we have this chance to
get
better and enjoy our life.
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IELTS essay How do you see yourself? How do others see you?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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