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Solar energy is becoming more popular around the world

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The hunt for sustainability is a quest of all countries in the modern world. One of the ways to achieve this is to produce clean energy. Hence, the interest in clean energy sources like wind energy, nuclear energy and solar energy is up the roof. Out of the clean energy sources, wind energy and nuclear energy require a significant capital investment whereas solar energy on the other hand is a cheaper alternative. It is not only cheaper but also the adoption can be quite quick. Starting from domestic level energy requirements to industrial needs, solar energy has got a solution. Solar energy comes with its own drawbacks as well. It can be leveraged in countries where is abundant sunlight. Solar energy projects require a massive stretch of land and finally, the energy generation in non-summer months might be poor. But we a step taken in solar energy is always a step taken in the right direction. So, clean energy sources should be explored based on the energy needs to make our earth a better place.
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clean
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energy
.
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, the interest in
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clean
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energy
sources like wind
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energy
, nuclear
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energy
and
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solar
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energy
is up the roof.

Out of the
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clean
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energy
sources, wind
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energy
and nuclear
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energy
require a significant capital investment whereas
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solar
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energy
on the other hand
is a cheaper alternative. It is not
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only
cheaper
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but
also
the adoption can be quite quick. Starting from domestic level
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energy
requirements to industrial needs,
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solar
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energy
has
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Solar
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energy
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comes
with its
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own
drawbacks
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be leveraged
in countries where is abundant sunlight.
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Solar
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energy
projects require a massive stretch of land and
finally
, the
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energy
generation in non-summer months might be poor.

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But
we a step taken in
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solar
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energy
is always a step taken in the right direction.
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So
,
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clean
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sources should
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energy
needs to
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make
our earth a better place.
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IELTS essay Solar energy is becoming more popular around the world

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
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