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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v.4

Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 4
In modern world people are enforced to use new technologies that will help them in various activities. Presently solar energy is using in house holds and getting its ground in number of countries. Here this essay will give clear view of advantage and disadvantage of solar panel. On constructive side, it has offered an alternative source of energy that is not harming the surrounding. The source energy such as motor generators will also produce electricity but it is unsafe to the habitat because it pollutes the climate. Furthermore, the cost of setting up solar panel are pocket friendly because government promoting solar panel. For instance study conducted by environmentalist reveal that government is given 50℅ offer for purchasing solar panels and it's usage is remarkably shortened the level of air infection. On the other hand, solar panel makes energy from energy depending on the weather condition. Moreover solar panel cannot produce daily required amount of energy during winter rainy season due to lack of sunlight and also solar panels consumes lots of space because of their size and nowdays most of the people are living in flats and appartments, so it is difficult to for them to install solar panels because space is limited. For example a survey conducted by government has shown that large section of society is still using moter generators as their power origin because of long duration of rainy and winter seasons. To conclude, solar energy is gaining popularity because it is safe and clean. In the coming years as the technology develops and solar panels become more affordable, its popularity will only increase.
In modern world
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people
are enforced
to
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use
new technologies that will
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help
them in various activities.
Presently
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solar
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energy
is using in
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house
holds and getting its ground in number of countries. Here this essay will give
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clear
view of advantage and disadvantage of
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solar
panel.

On constructive side, it has offered an alternative source of
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energy
that is
not harming the surrounding. The source
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energy
such as motor generators will
also
produce electricity
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but
it is unsafe to the habitat
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because
it pollutes the climate.
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, the cost of setting up
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solar
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panel
are pocket friendly
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because
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government
promoting
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solar
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panel
.
For instance
study conducted by environmentalist reveal that
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government
is
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given
50℅ offer for purchasing
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solar
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panels
and it's usage is
remarkably
shortened the level of air infection.

On the other hand
,
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panel
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makes
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energy
from
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energy
depending on the weather condition.
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Moreover
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solar
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panel
cannot produce daily required amount of
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energy
during winter rainy season due to lack of sunlight and
also
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solar
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panels
consumes lots of space
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because
of their size and
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nowdays
most of the
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people
are living in flats and
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appartments
,
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so
it is difficult to for them to install
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solar
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panels
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because
space
is limited
.
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a survey conducted by
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government
has shown that large section of society is
still
using
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moter
generators as their power origin
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because
of long duration of rainy and winter seasons.

To conclude
,
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solar
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energy
is gaining popularity
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because
it is safe and clean. In the coming years as the technology develops and
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solar
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panels
become more affordable, its popularity will
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only
increase.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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