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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v.21

Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 21
Various countries across the world have started using solar power for domestic purpose. Although solar stamina is eco-friendly and inexhaustible, it does have a few drawbacks natural resources like petrol, tar and fuels are limited and cannot meet the increasing demand for vitality. Consequently, scientists all over the world are researching alternative sources like sun and wind. Firstly, one of the benefits of solar power as already mentioned is its abundant availability, especially in tropical countries. In other words, sunlight is a natural source of heat and hence there is no danger of depletion, whereas, other sources of energy are already exhausted. Secondly, solar energy does not cause pollution since it does not involve the combustion of fuels. For instance solar panel needs only light energy so it is eco-friendly. Nevertheless, solar efficiency has its own limitations which restrict its widespread usage. The main drawback is that the solar panels which are required to extract solar stamina are very expensive and cannot be afforded by people from low income groups. Also the panels are quite huge and occupy a lot of space and hence many people are reluctant to use them. For example nowday most of the people lives in flats so their space is limited. Another disadvantage is that since solar spirit needs sunshine, it cannot be relied upon as the only source of spirit in many subtropical and temperate countries where it is winter for most parts of the year. To conclude, solar is becoming more and more popular as a source of strength because it is abundant, clean and green. However, it does have some disadvantages which discourage its widespread use.
Various countries across the world have
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started
using
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solar
power for domestic purpose. Although
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solar
stamina is eco-friendly and inexhaustible, it
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does
have a few drawbacks natural resources like petrol, tar and fuels
are limited
and cannot
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meet
the increasing demand for vitality.
Consequently
, scientists all over the world are researching alternative
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sources
like sun and wind.

Firstly
, one of the benefits of
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solar
power as already mentioned is its abundant availability,
especially
in tropical countries.
In other words
, sunlight is a natural
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source
of heat and
hence
there is no
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danger
of depletion, whereas, other
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sources
of energy are already exhausted.
Secondly
,
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solar
energy
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does
not cause pollution since it
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does
not involve the combustion of fuels.
For instance
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solar
panel needs
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only
light energy
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so
it is eco-friendly.

Nevertheless
,
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solar
efficiency has its
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own
limitations which restrict its widespread usage. The main drawback is that the
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solar
panels which
are required
to extract
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solar
stamina are
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very
expensive and cannot
be afforded
by
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people
from low income groups.
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Also
the panels are quite huge and occupy
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a lot of
space and
hence
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many
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people
are reluctant to
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use
them.
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nowday
most of the
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people
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lives
in flats
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so
their space
is limited
. Another disadvantage is that since
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solar
spirit needs sunshine, it cannot
be relied
upon as the
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only
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source
of spirit in
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many
subtropical and temperate countries where it is winter for most parts of the year.

To conclude
,
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solar
is becoming more and more popular as a
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source
of strength
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because
it is abundant, clean and green.
However
, it
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does
have
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some
disadvantages which discourage its widespread
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use
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IELTS essay Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 21

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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