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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. whybis this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v.20

Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. whybis this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 20
Consuming the sun's capacity in the correct way in domestic work is becoming more and more popular. Most economic and eco-friendly way of transforming the sunlight into the source of electricity are some reasons to make it ideal household vitality around the world. This essay will discuss both its negative and positive aspects of solar strength. There are a number of benefits of using intensity from the strongest star in the universe, especially, in the tropical regions. As the straight rays from the sun creates stable flow of vitality on the earth's surface which provides constant and efficient generation of light and warmth. The solar capacity helps in cooking food without causing any pollution in the ecosystem. Another example of domestication of this non-renewable source of function is of course solar panels on the rooftop of houses and lights on the streets. Overall, solar potential comes with no side effects to humans if used in the right context. Some restrictions of using solar spirit are related to weather conditions and the cost added to settle the talent plants and other equipments. Rainy and cloudy season are not appropriate for the production of solar potential which differ from place to place around the globe. Another concerning factor is the price involved in setting up the machinery to convert the stamina into a usable form. Hence, dependency on climate and involved cost is not suitable for some households. In view of the discussions outlined above, it can be summarised that there more advantages of solar energy than its flaws in the household work. Therefore, certain limitations can be ignored to effectively utilise the sun's strength for the humans.
Consuming the sun's capacity in the correct way in domestic work is becoming more and more popular. Most economic and eco-friendly way of transforming the sunlight into the source of electricity are
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some
reasons to
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make
it ideal household vitality around the world. This essay will discuss both its
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negative
and
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positive
aspects of
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solar
strength.

There are a number of benefits of using intensity from the strongest star in the universe,
especially
, in the tropical regions. As the straight rays from the sun creates stable flow of vitality on the earth's surface which provides constant and efficient generation of light and warmth. The
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solar
capacity
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helps
in cooking food without causing any pollution in the ecosystem. Another example of domestication of this non-renewable source of function is
of course
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solar
panels on the rooftop of
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houses
and lights on the streets.
Overall
,
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solar
potential
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comes
with no side effects to humans if
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used
in the right context.

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Some
restrictions of using
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solar
spirit
are related
to weather conditions and the cost
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added
to settle the talent plants and other equipments. Rainy and cloudy season are not appropriate for the production of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solar
potential which differ from place to place around the globe. Another concerning factor is the price involved in setting up the machinery to convert the stamina into a usable form.
Hence
, dependency on climate and involved cost is not suitable for
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some
households.

In view of the discussions outlined above, it can be
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summarised
that there more advantages of
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solar
energy than its flaws in the household work.
Therefore
, certain limitations can be
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ignored
to
effectively
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utilise
the sun's strength for the humans.
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IELTS essay Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. whybis this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 20

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4 paragraphs
276 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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