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Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. Ngjb
Advertisement has been very popular tools due to its development in commercial market. Some people believe that society would aids from a complete restriction on all forms of advertising while others condemn it. Despite certain drawbacks, I think some advertising has good motives. To begin with, many products has been launched and people are bored of its advertising. For instance, when watching television or YouTube, ads is given regularly which distract people to buy that things.
Advertisement has been
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very
popular tools due to its development in commercial market.
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Some
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people
believe that society would
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "aid"
aids
from a complete restriction on all forms of advertising while others condemn it. Despite certain drawbacks, I
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think
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some
advertising has
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good
motives. To
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begin
with,
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many
products has
been launched
and
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people
are
In standard English it's more accepted to use "bored with" or "bored by".
bored of
its advertising.
For instance
, when watching television or YouTube, ads is
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given
regularly
which distract
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people
to
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buy
that things.

IELTS essay Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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