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Social media and fake stars

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Everything in our world is surrounded by new technology. There is no doubt that the internet and social media are the most wired things. The internet was founded at the end of the 90’s descent. The internet was a small project of the American army. Nowadays, there are some people we can encounter that trying to forge fake popularity. They want to be satisfied by showing their stuff on social media, but some new problems have arisen. They try to deceive people by making some sensations that are not correct. With the help of social media, they want to say they have many possessions and that their life is fabulous. It is crucial to learn how to recognize and mitigate the influence of these fake stars in our real life. We should have prospects in any part of our lives and avoid stress and getting stuck in fake situations.

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