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smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people

smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people bwW6
it is fact that smoking becoming significantly popular with youngsters. there are several reasons for such a situation and also few visible influences too. both the aspects aspects are explained in the ensuring paragraphs. discussing the reasons, the, most common one is most young people are engaged in smoking. this is because of that have a lack of knowledge about it as well as their are not much aware about the consequences about it
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it
is fact that smoking becoming
significantly
popular with youngsters.
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there
are several reasons for such a situation and
also
few visible influences too.
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both
the
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aspects aspects
are
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explained
in the ensuring paragraphs.

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discussing
the reasons,
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the,
most common one is
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most
young
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people
are engaged
in smoking.
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this
is
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because
of that have a lack of knowledge about it
as well
as
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their
are not much aware about the
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consequences about
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it

IELTS essay smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
73 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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