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some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for business. Discuss both sides, and give your own opinion.

some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for business. 623j
Feeling concerned about the deteriorating consequences of human activities on the environment, governments throughout the world seek ways to improve it. Opinions widely vary as to whether the overall effect of climate change reforms on businesses is positive or negative. This essay will analyze both sides of the argument and give a concluding view. On the one hand, in the first place, it is claimed that companies should take social responsibilities despite increasing the profit, meaning that enforcing reforms can inform them about the adverse effects of climate change on humankind. In other words, eco-friendly products not only would motivate consumers, especially those who are in favor of protecting the environment, to buy certain goods, but it would also reduce the severity of the climate change issues. As a case in point, coca-cola tends to replace cardboard cans instead of plastic ones in the near future on the grounds of damages their products inflict on the environment. Moreover, the implementation of these reforms would penetrate into individuals' lifestyle. Manufacturing electric cars by Mercedes Benz from 2030 is a good illustration for this change. As a result, it seems that enforcing climate change reforms would increase companies' reputation and their brands' value. Conversely, these reforms would indeed be expensive for some businesses because of changing their infrastructures. Obviously, small companies cannot bear the burden of these exorbitant costs, leading them to close. This, in turn, may cause unemployment issues, which have negative effects on countries' economy. Added to this, neither businesses nor governments can do much alone to tackle the climate change crisis; therefore, more long-term programs and joint efforts would be essentials. In conclusion, it appears that even though climate change reforms have some challenges on businesses, such as high expenses, it can be known as a chance for businesses to raise their profit and popularity. From my point of view, the benefits of this law outweigh its drawbacks.
Feeling concerned about the deteriorating consequences of human activities on the environment,
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governments
throughout the world seek ways to
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improve
it. Opinions
widely
vary
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as to whether
the
overall
effect of
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climate
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change
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reforms
on
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businesses
is
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positive
or
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negative
. This essay will analyze both sides of the argument and give a concluding view.

On the one hand, in the
first
place, it
is claimed
that
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companies
should take social responsibilities despite increasing the profit, meaning that enforcing
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reforms
can inform them about the adverse effects of
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climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
on humankind.
In other words
, eco-friendly products not
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only
would motivate consumers,
especially
those who are in favor of protecting the environment, to
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buy
certain
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goods
,
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but
it would
also
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reduce
the severity of the
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climate
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change
issues. As a case in point, coca-cola tends to replace cardboard cans
instead
of plastic ones in the near future on the grounds of damages their products inflict on the environment.
Moreover
, the implementation of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reforms
would penetrate into individuals' lifestyle. Manufacturing electric cars by
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Mercedes Benz
from 2030 is a
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good
illustration for this
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change
.
As a result
, it seems that enforcing
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climate
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change
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reforms
would increase
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companies
' reputation and their brands' value.

Conversely
, these
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reforms
would
indeed
be expensive for
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some
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businesses
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because
of changing their infrastructures.
Obviously
,
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small
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companies
cannot bear the burden of these exorbitant costs, leading them to close. This, in turn, may cause unemployment issues, which have
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negative
effects on countries' economy.
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Added
to this, neither
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businesses
nor
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governments
can do much alone to tackle the
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climate
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change
crisis;
therefore
, more long-term programs and joint efforts would be essentials.

In conclusion
, it appears that
even though
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climate
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change
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reforms
have
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some
challenges on
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businesses
, such as high expenses, it can
be known
as a chance for
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businesses
to raise their profit and popularity. From my point of view, the benefits of this law outweigh its drawbacks.
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IELTS essay some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for business.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
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