Smoking is hazardous to health, as it is said 'smoking kills'. But not only it has adverse effects on the people actively smoking, it affects the passive smokers to a great extent. It is a debatable topic whether cigarette usage should be prohibited in public places. In the essay, I'll share views on whether smoking should be disallowed in open places or not.
According to a study of Columbia University, it has been found that 40% of the patients who had lung diseases or breathing problems never smoked. However, they were more in contact with the people who were chain-smokers. It is clearly evident that the mere presence in tobacco flavoured air is slow poison which leads to life threatening ailments. Public places should be protected from being death grounds for well being of mankind.
The other view point can be if no smoking in public or open places, is it safe to smoke indoors or privately? Another research by the Illinois University has claimed that most of the house fire accidents that occurred in recent past months were due to indoor smoking. Along with it, if smoking gets banned. It will drastically affect the taxes and revenue scenario for the government, ultimately reflecting on the economy.
Whatsoever be the overall scene, I strongly speak in favour of the ban on smoking, not only in the people gathering areas, but also anywhere else. Production of tobacco related products should not be given any license as health is the real wealth. 
 Smoking
 is hazardous to health, as it  
is said
 'smoking kills'.  
But
 not  
only
 it has adverse effects on the  
people
  actively
  smoking
, it affects the passive smokers to a great extent. It is a debatable topic whether cigarette usage should  
be prohibited
 in public  
places
. In the essay, I'll share views on whether  
smoking
 should  
be disallowed
 in open  
places
 or not.
According to a study of Columbia University, it has  
been found
 that 40% of the patients who had lung diseases or breathing problems never smoked.  
However
, they were more in contact with the  
people
 who were chain-smokers. It is  
clearly
 evident that the mere presence in tobacco  
flavoured
 air is slow poison which leads to life threatening ailments. Public  
places
 should  
be protected
 from being death grounds for  
well being
 of mankind.
The other view point can be if no  
smoking
 in public or open  
places
, is it safe to smoke indoors or  
privately
? Another research by the Illinois University has claimed that most of the  
house
 fire accidents that occurred in recent past months were due to indoor  
smoking
. Along with it, if  
smoking
  gets
 banned. It will  
drastically
 affect the taxes and revenue scenario for the  
government
,  
ultimately
 reflecting on the economy.
Whatsoever be the  
overall
 scene, I  
strongly
 speak in  
favour
 of the ban on  
smoking
, not  
only
 in the  
people
 gathering areas,  
but
  also
 anywhere else. Production of tobacco related products should not be  
given
 any license as health is the real wealth. 
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