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Smoking in public places should be banned. Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Smoking in public places should be banned. Discuss. KwGeN
It is a well-known fact that smoking is injurious to ones' health yet many are addicted to smoking. People addicted to smoking do not consider the adverse health effects occuring to those present around them. This is one of the various reasons which is why most think that smoking should be banned in public places. To begin with, many people are already suffering from breathing issues and lung diseases due to the excessive pollution present in the atmosphere. Smoking in public places is like adding more salt to the wound. Smokers are accustomed to the smell of the nicotine but the surrounders are not. Smoking in public places can adversely affect the health of especially the elders and children. Another reason is that smoking in public places leads to the passive smoking which is just as harmful and dangerous as active smoking. Passive smoking can lead to diseases such as lung cancers. Also, the smell of cigarettes and cigar creates a foul odour in the atmosphere and the people surrounding that area might face a problem in breathing. The smell can be intoxicating to which people might avoid going to outdoors for their work purposes. Instead of completing banning, a common ground can be found. The government can allot a few areas as smoking zones where people who want to smoke can visit there. Also, strict rules can be implemented and fines can be charged to those who smokes in a non-smoking area. In sum, a common solution can be drawn so that it does not affect the sentiments and health problems of the majority as well as the minority which are the smokers. Therefore, all the issues of adverse effects of smoking in public places must be considered and a general solution must be drawn.
It is a well-known fact that
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smoking
is injurious to ones'
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health
yet
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many
are addicted
to
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smoking
.
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People
addicted to
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smoking
do not consider the adverse
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health
effects
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occuring
to those present around them. This is one of the various reasons which is why most
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think
that
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smoking
should
be banned
in
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public
places.

To
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begin
with,
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many
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people
are already suffering from breathing issues and lung diseases due to the excessive pollution present in the atmosphere.
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Smoking
in
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public
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places
is like adding more salt to the wound. Smokers
are accustomed
to the smell of the nicotine
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but
the
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surrounders
are not.
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in
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public
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places
can
adversely
affect the
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health
of
especially
the elders and children.

Another reason is that
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smoking
in
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public
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places
leads to the passive
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smoking
which is
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just
as harmful and
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dangerous
as active
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smoking
. Passive
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smoking
can lead to diseases such as lung cancers.
Also
, the smell of cigarettes and cigar creates a foul
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odour
in the atmosphere and the
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people
surrounding that area might face a problem in breathing. The smell can be intoxicating to which
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people
might avoid going to outdoors for their work purposes.

Instead
of completing banning, a common ground can
be found
. The
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government
can allot a few areas as
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smoking
zones where
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people
who want to smoke can visit there.
Also
, strict
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rules
can
be implemented
and fines can
be charged
to those who smokes in a non-smoking area.

In sum, a common solution can
be drawn
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so
that it does not affect the sentiments and
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health
problems of the majority
as well
as the minority which are the smokers.
Therefore
, all the issues of adverse effects of
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smoking
in
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public
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places
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must
be considered
and a general solution
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must
be drawn
.
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IELTS essay Smoking in public places should be banned. Discuss.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
296 words
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