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Sme students work while studying. What do you think are the causes of this?what solutions can you suggest?

Money plays a vital role in everyone's life. Some scholars are doing part time jobs along with studies. I will discuss reasons and solutions in upcoming paragraphs. Let us deliberate the compelling reasons, which wil leads towards a reasonable inference. There are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the causes. To plunge into, the most intrinsic one is lack of education facilities in rural areas. To justify, more and more learners go to the other nations or states due to lack of good educational institutions which are not available in their own countries. For instance, nowadays majority of students are migrating to other nations like Canada, Australia and other nations.
Money plays a vital role in everyone's life.
Some
scholars are doing part time jobs along with studies. I will discuss reasons and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
Let
us deliberate the compelling reasons, which wil leads towards a reasonable inference.

There are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the causes. To plunge into, the most intrinsic one is lack of education facilities in rural areas. To justify, more and more learners go to the other nations or states due to lack of
good
educational institutions which are not available in their
own
countries.
For instance
, nowadays majority of students are migrating to other nations like Canada, Australia and other nations.
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IELTS essay Sme students work while studying. What do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
111 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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